Not a fan of the cheaper sounding synth , vocals remind me a bit of old paul wall , personally the backing track lets down the track. Jon bruv , keep crafting your art (vocals could be tighter) @reginalgreen https://soundcloud.com/reginalgreen your more then welcome to give me some feedback too, would be appreciated

Intro was terrible lol. This song say to simple for this era. Good quality tho its just not catchy.

Not really into this genre but this is well done.

Cool song like the flow of the music, well arranged and great recording and vocals, great work.

Nice. Loving it. Groove, voice, instrumentation mix well Irie. Yeah!!! keep it up you all.

The tracks has a good sound but the volume dropped for some reason after the song started. I think percussion would move the beat a bit better. The vocalist has a decent flow and hook but could have a more passionate delivery.

Hate all the together voices sound demonic. Everything else is okay, I would rework the voices, get rid of them. In a scale from1 to 10 i give you a 4

I sort of feel where your coming from as far as the story line, cool. But the verse needs some get up on it. And i would say play with your words a lil more. And the main important thing is production, search and find better beats..or check out what makes the billboard charts to see why this songs are #1

i love your tea! HAHAHA! the beat is sick! kickass lyrics! well done m8 good job! :) x

Not our cup of tea

you are one serious dude, however, your song sounds like rap from the nineteen-eighties. get up to date with a modern dj and pick up the tempo and energy level. lyrics are good.. phrasing is boring.. best of luck and god bless.

Chorus & music starts out well. 1st rap is borderline. needs more work. Overall like most of the rap but needs more energy. The flow works. Thank you for no profanity.