Dear subscribers. My song North and South has a very good review I love to share with you. What do you think? Agree with the review? What is your favorite song of mine? I keep working on my new songs. Hope to show you soon some more. For now one tune already... https://www.audiolibrary.com.co/hyde-free-instrumentals/acoustic-folk-instrumental This will be for Carousel. Which will be the name of the Album. I do not know if it will the biggest song, like North and South. But I like Carousel. Shadows the movie I am making, will have songs of Carousel too in it. The lyrics will be somewhat like: It's a piece, you and me, you watching over me. vs1. Dripping, the rain falling inside of me You're every part of my wall, and you bent it all for me Iron melts vs2. We're growing circular like a carousel drippin' inside on my heartbeat your heart outside a second heart beating as mine living, alive riding my life a carousel that never parts driving inside it's a ride propelling, my life my beautiful carousel every piece of my heart in our carousel like the rain falling every drop into a piece of our carousel every drop changing into a piece of our carousel, carousel, carousel my every dream of you my every dream my every dream of you dripping... dripping inside on my heartbeat I knew I had a heart outside a second heart that beat like mine living a life and around again... God made a piece for your carousel going around, to be homebound every morning, dawn, you know you found the missing piece of your carousel, homebound and when you're down you can wound up your carousel I will go round in between all the pieces in your carousel smiling, loving, you, and your sound, on your heartbeat every part of our carousel our carousels seemly dreaming together beating finding the same speed, and like the rain failing inside of us our every part of, our walls into one carousel, carousel my desire, your desire in one carousel So, for now, my review of North and South.... you can read below... L;ove you all! Love you so much! Thank you for reading my email. Song: North and south Overall Impression: Jiska Hachmer has a sweet natural voice, accompanied by light instrumentals, North and South is a delightful song. The lyrics are clever, and delivered in a manner that shows off Jiska's vocal range and virtuosic talents; she has a command of her voice that demonstrates that she can sing with power, and also so vulnerably that it is almost fragile, but never breaks, and everywhere in between. The form of the song is very nice as well, with a clear musical and character development, and opening and closing with similar words, but a new meaning. Strongest Point(s): The songwriting skills exhibited by both Josh Woodward and Jiska Hachmer are individually splendid, but together result in a terrific collaboration. The instrumentals fit the tone of the song magnificently, and support the melody with tasteful harmony. The vocals are masterful, and offer a wide range of skill; in tone, tune, articulation, and dynamics. Lyrically, the song paints a vivid image of character development, and are reinforced by matched energy and feel in the song. As I said earlier, the form of the song terrific; it is clear and well thought out, reinforcing not only the words in the title, but their changing meaning (as I perceived). Area(s) of Improvement: The recording quality in the vocal mic isn't the greatest, but I feel with a higher quality mic you'll have more of an opportunity to clearly exhibit your voice. Target Audience Appeal: Fans of soft rock, folk, acoustic rock, pop, pop rock, today's hits will enjoy this song. This has a wide array of potential on screen (in film, indie films, tv, streaming services like Hulu and Netflix, and ads) along with mainstream radio. This song has the potential to make big waves, the more exposure you give it, the more likely it is it and you as an artist are to be picked up. Artist target suggestions: Your voice is unique and I believe have an excellent future with your music. Although influences are important, your voice is the most important in shaping your future. Jiska Hachmer, Jewel, Ariana Grande, Celso Pina, Christina Aguilera, Compay Segundo, Dua Lipa, Duncan Dhu, Ed Sheeran, Grupo Canaveral, James Arthur, John Mayer, José Feliciano, Justin Bieber, Kevin Gates, Little Mix, Los Acosta, Los Mirlos, Los Ángeles Azules, Lukas Graham, Madonna, Miley Cyrus, One Direction, Paula Abdul, Selena Gomez, Taylor Swift, Virus (Latin), Zara Larsson About the Reviewer: Rob Lawson is a Master’s Music Performance major at Indiana University of Pennsylvania. He is a percussionist, composer, conductor, and recording artist. He has performed with the Wind Ensemble, Symphony Orchestra, Percussion Ensemble, Brass Ensemble, Horn Choir, Pit Orchestra, and Keystone Winds. He has composed, arranged, and premiered works for Percussion Ensemble, Pep Band, and Brass Quintet at IUP, and conducted the Pep Band, Symphony Band, Percussion Ensemble, Brass Ensemble, and Chamber Ensembles, along with various recitals. Rob graduated from Baldwin Wallace Conservatory of Music, where he earned a Bachelor’s of Music in Performance, was the Principal Percussionist and Timpanist of the Wind Ensemble, Percussionist and Drummer with the Beatles Band, and conducted the Wind Ensemble, Symphonic Band, Symphony Orchestra, New Music Orchestra, and various Chamber Ensembles. Rob also has experience with the recording process, both in front and behind the mic, from solo pieces to rock bands to full orchestral ensembles. He also teaches private lessons in percussion, conducting, music theory, and has taught high school marching percussion. Vocals: Strength Lyrics: Strength Instrumental Performance/Execution: Strength Melody/Rhythm: Strength Arrangement/Flow: Strength Recording Quality/Overall Mix: Needs Improvement