Your song has potential. But take some time to work on your mix, flow, and staying on the subject of the song. But the mix is the major problem. The rapping levels are so much higher than the rest of the track.

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Yoooooooooooo dis shit go hard brother! I think yu should choose a different kinda beat.... and turn your vocals down just a smig. Yu definitely got Talent and you have your own sound which is another plus in my book! Look forward to hearing more from yu hopefully somewhere down the line we kan do something bro! Stay on shit don't let nobody stop yu! Nobody and I mean nobody wants to see yu win more than yu do! ` -Manolo

I get the point that they making but the recording could of been better I just feel that they should of took more time with this one I Sounds like it was rushed I just feel patients is always best when u wanna make a point

The hook is dope! I would've like to have some better lyricist I felt that they was rushing through the track instead of riding the wave on the track! Moreover I think the song overall was very catchy. A good song to get in you vehicle and just ride.

Great news - You've graduated! May the future bring even more success for you. Congratulations on your graduation! Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. Always follow your dreams and believe in yourself. I saw how much effort you put learning in college. Well done! Now you can steer yourself in any direction you choose. I wish you luck! Graduating is a special and exciting moment, make the most of it and good luck for the future! Celebrate your success on your graduation from high school! Wishing you to achieve your goals and have a great career. After all the hard work, you've come through with flying colours. Congratulations! Congratulations on this wonderful achievement, Doctor! The horizon leans forward, offering you space to place new steps of change. You have walked a long way toward this goal but you have successfully managed. Best wishes for you on your graduation from university! An investment in knowledge always pays the best interest.

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It was definitely decent song had started out well up with when I soon as the hook but the verse one was very rushed I felt like the delivery was rushed and you should go back re record slow it down and vibe with the tempo but over all very good concept decent struck share decent quality should mix a little bit better take time in really in all play with the sound but over all really nice and keep doing your thing man absolutely keep doing your thing and none of what I'm saying here is knocking you whatsoever it is all to have you think a little bit deeper much love #WHeLDuN Please take a listen to some of my songs that I have and that will give you an idea of what I mean when it comes to vibe with the tempo week it and make it believable those words each word needs to touch the soul of the listener you need to somehow make them believe they are in that moment with you again much love and respect I have to say you go back to the drawing board can do those couple things I suggested and keep doing those things you will shine bright no matter where you are Again I must say #WHeLDuN

what it do tho!! your track is fire tho,u got a old skoo type of vibe!!! keep yo head headed toward million dollar dream because hataz gonna hate but true skill is in your art your musicc!!! god bless & keep bringing that fire!!!

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I review one of your last song I'm not for sure if it was this one or not I just know I really loved it so aint no doubt in my mind that I wasn't going to love this one keep up the good work and remember what makes a great artist better is always practicing his music before recording it just words of advice from someone whose been writing music since 7 years old.

Writing from reality.......The solo in the song,helps explinate your song! Truth makes singing from the heart easy. Updated track, flow smooth. For artist in the struggle mode can vibe and understand. Good Stuff

Determination is the vibe i get from this track. Like dont give up on your dreams, stay motivated, dont let people discourage you from keep striving to whatever you want to accomplish. Cmint lyrics are telling and inspiring. This is the type of message that more people need to hear especially the youth who are so influenced by music and trends. Never going back! Thats how you do it!

Nice I think this song is really nice. The whole song is well put together. The audio and production quality sounds awesome. You really did your thing on this track. I can definitely see your career going very far if you can continue to make this type of music. I love the fact that you show passion in your song and that speaks in volumes to the listeners. Keep up the hard work! You definitely have what it takes to go to the top. Good luck.

It's definitely a nice song I like the beat my man is really flowing on their he stand on subject the production is nice I say keep doing what you doing keep grinding believe in yourself make it happen

I recommend working on delivery and the lyris are good but the way you rapping it sounds rushed and all over the place and the mix is off the beat cool the hook cool but the overall quality is not good keep pushing and come harder

The track is nice. Nice upscale hip hop beat in the background. Excellent vocals on intro and hook. Vocals, lyrics and transitions were on point. Vocals remained in sync and on tempo with beat throughout the track. Nothing negative to add. Good work.

Continue to believe in yourself and don't allow anyone to deter you from your dreams. You really delivered like you have a story to tell and have actually experienced the things you are spitting about in the song. We loose a lot of people along the way, but one thing for sure, as long as we have breath in our bodies, we got ourselves. Keep grinding.