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I would say you have a good single with this one. I heard your song for the first time about a week ago. I've been singing your hook to myself and it's been playing in my head ever since! That hook line and chorus melody is fire. It's catchy. And obviously hard to forget. I mean I've literally been just doing something in the house, and I hear your song in my head. That's crazy! That's a good song. That's what you want your impact to be on listeners. After one time of hearing your song, they can't forget it. I can hear a remix or at least one more verse added on... Or do the chorus at least one or two more times before fading out. And I would mix the lead vocal track in with the music a lil better. Maybe take a little of the low EQ out of your lead vocal. And maybe add a little bit of compression to your lead vocal track as well. It'll smooth your levels out during your verse. Other than that I'd say it's a great choice for a single. I'd go ahead and push it.

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This track puts me in the Bones & Thugs feel.. I like this track because it took me back to the 90’s . Nice storyline that had nice lyrics as well. I really like the beat on this track, nicely blended background vocals and the lead vocals was nice and smooth. I really think this track will get some airplay but if I was to give any constructive feedback I would like for this track to be longer! Because right when the listener gets into this track it ends.. But all and all I think you have something here! Best of luck to you! -Chandler-

Ok so this beat is super dope first and foremost. The flow for this beat needs to be tightened up. I feel like the flow was slightly too slow to fully grasp onto the beat I think if you used a faster flow in some of those spots (not all) the whole record would go up a few levels off rip. What's probably more important is the mixing needs a lot of work. I can tell you recorded this with what you have because the vocals sound very dull. It lacks body. Delays and reverbs definately lack in this mix...dropping some of the low frequencies and properly taming the highs would be good for the eq ...overall it has potential just gotta go back in and perfect this. Hope this helps

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That’s some riding music I think you might need Harmonize on your hook and it’s ready to fly Salute the writing I understood what you was saying so it made it rideable Good job in all tho salute

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What's good! Thanks for submitting this for review! To start you have a really strong melody in your hook. I think you've done a really good job writing this song. The breaks are really good as well. To get this to the next level I would recommend a few things. First, I would do some tuning to all the vocals. Its an industry practice now to use a program like celemony melodyne or waves tune or something like that to tighten up the vocals. I think if you did that you would be amazed at how much cleaner it sounds. Aside from that, I would work with the reverb to make the song more 3 dimensional. It sounds like you're working in that space, but I would be more liberal with the panning and reverb just to get things to hit in the right places. Outside of those production aspects its a really strong song. Good work! -Rashon Medlock

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