I kant really understand much of the vocals bekuz they were drowned out but if you took your time and redid this and perfected it I have a strong feelings it'd be super dope...i reallllly like the creativity tho!

Nice work! Remember theirs nothing wrong with harmonizing with a different octave

good idea with what your tryna do and i like the creativity and art sense you approached this with, but there may be too much happening all at the same time, can be a really funky and ginger infused track but gotta find a balance there and then you'll have something wonderful, but keep it going...

sorry dude.... just sounded like a sloppy 4 track demo to me! Hope ur other stuff is better.....

Man. This is Marley/K-os/ some typa track id hit! I really dig it.Great Instrumentation (solo was too loud at first but fell into place) Smooth vocals, nice lyrics but delivery dont feel 100 to me.. timing is everything. Great song tho and all it needs is that "Expensive" sound..

dope stuff! Nice flow, I like your voice. The beat could be more bangin though.

this is a nice freestyle jam. this should be very inspirational to any artist true to the craft poetry ,hip hop, r and b , spoken word, . this is a real jam session. good job guys. keep it up. Mr. boom Doggottie

OK, very hard to review with this mix. It does sound live but a little too messy for me to be objective, nice chords..

Turn it up lol I see what direction you are trying to get to keep on and you will soon get there. I always send a reminder for everyone to also like and support my music @www.reverbnation.com/kdsavannahke

Love the bells in the introduction of this classic sounding record. Great job capturing the spirit of a neo soul singer, folk artist and a hint of Jim Morrison's songwriting insight. The sound of the percussion is like a water filled jug being swirled around while tapping a groove out. The overlaying Clean Guitar solo takes it to another level of cool! I would like that the vocals were more featured then they are,but in all a good sounding mixture!

I would like to hear this done with a much better mix. The quality of the sound made it very difficult to appreciate the words or the tune, which were actually quite good. Please master profressionally and reload.

I'm keeping it very honest when i say PLEASE RECORD THIS IN A STUDIO OR AT LEAST GET A BETTER QUALITY VERSION. The song tune is good. I'm diggin the lyrics. Other than that. do a little bit better. The melody is too good to be massacred.

good song just turn up the volume

Pero el trabajo deberia ser menos complicado, no llega a calar y repito que la idea es buena.........perfilar el ritmo, es demasiado lioso. Flansi Suiza

Your singing is great, the lyrics are complementing the subject and the purpose of the song which is good. The quality of your vocals mic wise is the big turn off of your song overall. The beats are too compressed and sounds off beat until you start playing your guitar louder. I feel if you recorded this song at a professional studio you could make this a big song. Keep it up and invest in a better mic.

The Free Form feel is interesting. I don't completely get it, but in most cases that works. Cause I like the sound, but because I don't get it I would be intrigued to listen again. It's definitely groovy, and reminds me of old school vinyl recordings. Just not sure what to call it, find where the track is going. It is a toss up to me.

i like the voice,i like the ambition,but ambition needs to be followed with a production,keep up with the work :)

The lyrics are clever, but the vocals lack any hook or dynamic. They lack anything to draw the listener in. Some of the washy background noises (hand percussion, organ?, bass etc) give it a really ambient, almost creepy feel. As odd as it sounds, it kind of fits. Id say that its the muddiness of the recording that gives the song emotion. By the end of the track, i found myself enjoying it alot! So, my initial response was "meh", but my final response is "not bad at all, if youre going for the sort of ambient/erie sound"

I am sorry but has this track been removed? I am not getting anything here. Let me know when it has been restored and I will come back. Thanks AEP