i have kept listening to your songs and understanding every words, i have been singing line after line , playing over and over again to get the music and what it means to love a songs. i love your songs and i want to say you are really a wonderful filled person , i appreciate your hard work , i really do , you have put your self in the place where your music has been able to connect with people across the globe, i am always feeling special when i listen to your music, it feel like i am have found an hidden wisdom, i know that no one is perfect but with you perfection is your way of life

Not sure where this track was going, but it's going somewhere. That does make it interesting. some abstract chords. there are some stops in the middle of the song which remind me of another song, but i can't remember which one. certainly an element of funk in there which i am a big fan of.

rock un po nostrano e spiace dirlo anche dilettante senza ne capo ne coda con registrazione un po alla casaccio batteria chitarra e basso la chitarra sembra anche scordata magari e fatto questo pezzo da buontemponi che lo fanno per passare il tempo ma ci vorrebbe almeno una registrazione professionale ugni tanto una tastiera fa dei canti ma se divertite cosi' non cìe' niente di male

The song is ok, however, there are prominent fluctuations in the tempo of the drums, at around 2:40. It slows down considerably. Drum timing is everything. If this was intentional, probably not a great idea. It gives your audience the perspective that this drummer has a serious timing issue, especially since the slow down was slight enough as to not signal a purposely done tempo change. Also, the bass and drums timing is off. Drums and Bass need to be tight and spot on, as this is the cohesive foundation of the entire track. You will notice this at the very beginning when the song starts. The very FIRST few bass notes are not in time with the drums. The bass riff at 2:40, is COMPLETELY out of sync with the drums. There are also parts of the song that the bass is slightly sharp (out of tune) compared to the keys. These elements are critical if you want to display your work in a professional manner. I am not knocking the song, style, or overall performance, but I am advising you to pull the track and re record it. Focus on timing. Use a click track if needed. Its important. Put it this way, I was playing a club in Seattle and the band hired a temporary drummer to fill in. Half way through the show, his timing was everywhere. I was mortified and just wanted to leave the stage. I just can't stress enough the importance of bass/drum tightness and timing. It is VERY evident, even to those who are average listeners.

Great Instrumental great piece of work ............wow nice this AWESOME .this instrumental song has a really good.and ....................................the song was put together is very unique.......................................just love the way the sounds they were like instruments were spot on ................. perfectly........................can't say enough about this instrumental song......................................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thankyou.................................