deep atmosphere, but powerful too; the melodic line is good and the arrangement too; i feel your song well performed, even if not my genre;when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; probably a little too repetitive but a good song; good luck and keep it up

You can make a better mix. The drum is not clear enough and the guitar sound is not sharp enough. The drum must punch more. Guitar sound needs more mid. The bass sound should be sharp and round to be clear in the blend. The sound of the bass intro is terrible. Great guitar solo. Sorry for my honesty! HUMAN AFTERMATH

Great Ramones-echo on the vocal. Now the other instruments need to be brought "up" in the mix. Drums: add some slapback to the snare so the vocalist doesn't sound so isolated. Bass and guitar need some parallel compression. Eq some highs on the bass' parallel track and some mids on the parallel guitar. All that will help the guitar-solo-finale sound less empty. Then resubmit for us to critique.

i think you should concentrate on playing with more of a bass sharpness....the guitar is treble and nothing ties it to the rumbling bass below....i think more mid range on the guitar would blend them.....your singing would be different then too see there is no depth to the song, right? remember that a central lead ...complimented.. will make depth

GOOD LYRICS, GREAT DRUMMER, GUITAR SOLO IS MONSTEROUS

The beginning of the song kind of reminded me of the matrix movie, in which I really love. I really like the effects within the instrumental as well as the flow of the vocals with the instrumental. To me, the song is something a guy could rock out on. I like it, keep up the good work.

Very good take in the genre. The vocals are well adapted to the kind of music and they are powerful enough. The guitars are excellent.