Song Reviews
Great Song!
Hey hows it going king, I really like the song! Structure, flow, and delivery sounds leveled great; Message is A+. I would advise an ad-lib layer to emphasize your punchlines and metaphors. The only problem I have is I am forced to listen rather than simply finding my own way to love the song; if that was your goal then mission accomplished.
United States, Pennsylvania, Fredericksburg
nice
sounds real good fam keep it up........hot beat and nice lyrics ..........................................................................
United States, Colorado, Mile High
YO YO
Yo Kind D.O.S.A...daaaam man I dig your lyrics homeboy..you taking hip hop back to its roots..hell Ya im a fan for sure..I dig that Beat too..Im sure you or someone Made that..sounds hella good..clean legit..MUCH LOVE MY FELLOW REAL HIP HOPPER
United States, Nevada, McGill
Arc Review
From a technical stand point, I would try to differentiate between your verses and hook. They both seem to have the same cadence/flow. I would try to find a different melody that doesn't blend so much with the verses. Also I would add a bridge somewhere to break up the predictable verse/hook/verse/hook arrangement. There are spots throughout the verses where you are off beat as well. Like you tried to fit too many syllables into a bar that didn't match the previous bar or the bar immediately after. Back to the hook, maybe you could keep the same flow but maybe add some effects such as an exaggerated reverb or triple up your vocal tracks and delay one to make it sound a little wider and fill up more space in the mix. Maybe even play with some inserts and distort an ad-lib track in the back ground. Just a couple tips that I've learned to make your mix sound fuller.
United States, California, San Diego
My Review
I like your flow and your voice is strong. The music makes me move wish is important for people to dance to. The hook is nice I like it a lot. Keep up the good work Cooley Jaxson....
United States, California, Rockin
king dosa
Salute great content lyrical flow beat A plus my g more music like this needed I can feel this in my chest when I hear your dope respect bless king I love it
United States, New Jersey, Roselle
Deep
Great lyrics... Keep it going and keep it original... Great song....................... ..... ..
St. Vincent and the Grenadines, Kingstown
King D.O.S.A
No need to understand English to recognize a very good sound. the melody is superb, the rhymes are linked perfectly. gender is risky because it is the very basis of hip hop. great respect.
France, Paris
Lyrics Win every time
The Beat is very good and the lyrics are great to. The engineering is good to. You have the ability to be great and greater and your intentions and is pure. It heard thru the music especially from someone like me. .I think in due time i will see you on mtg jams. You have a great way to speak your opinion while keeping people conscious........
United States, Pennsylvania, York
Powerful
This song is very powerful and heartfelt. The one thing that gets me off track was the intro voice, it kept fading in and out and in again, but when you started raping everything was all good. Soooo idk if I'm helpful hahahaha all I can say was that this song was extremely powerful. Your a storyteller well done!!!! Keep it going and stay away from raping about girls and money stay true :-)
United States, California, Sacramento
Real
Dope man. Too real that's why it wont get any airplay, not because it's wack but because it's real and the enemy don't want our people out of their comfort zone and remain ignorant. So I appreciate songs like these because they are fruitful. From Judo Flip in South Africa in saying well executed!
South Africa, Middelburg
REVIEW
Can really see the truth in the lyrics here and your flow is on point keep pushing man.
United Kingdom, Hartlepool
awesome
U nailed it good job nce song and I was feeling the flow good work hope we work together sometime I really like ur works Weldone .....You Did it D.o.s.a
United States, California, Los Angeles
Dope
Hey I like your style and vibe we should colab some time if u ever would like to let me know we can exchange emails.I am a indie artist out of LA CA..
United States, California, Los Angeles
Hot shit!!!!
I like the introduction and the beat cold as Hell!!! Yo delivery was perfect too...do you ever perform?? Hmu maybe we can trade venues or something...add me on Facebook if u got one Ben franky or Ben frank
United States, Ohio, Wilmington
D.O.S.A REVIEW
GREAT BEAT, AND REALLY GOOD LYRICS. I LIKE THA PRODUCTION AND THE PERFORMANCE. U FLOWED WELL WITH THE BEAT. THAT'S A BIG PLUS WHEN ALOT OF ARTISTS HAVE NO CLUE HOW TO GO "WITH" THA BEAT VERSUS GOING "AGAINST" THA BEAT. HOW LONG HAVE U BEEN RAPPING? SOUNDS TO ME LIKE U HAVE BEEN IN THIS GAME FOR AT LEAST 10 YEARS. WELL, U HAVE A REALLY GOOD TRACK ON UR HANDS. 5 STARS FROM ME MANE. KEEP UP THA GREAT WORK. *NB*
United States, Texas, FORT WORTH
too hard
Hey this song is hard as hell u are what i call a artist the words and you can hear them in your rap im digging this track keep doind your thing maybe we can link up
United States, Tennessee, Nashville
Feelin Da D.O.S.A
What's good King D.O.S.A I listened to the D.O.S.A Ark and I'm feeling your content. The whole vibe of the of D.O.S.A's Ark track because the subject matter really seemed to compliment the beat and your whole presence made it something worth listening to again. Nice ish my dude!
United States, Pennsylvania, Farrell
Good Song with Substance & Honesty
From the beginning of the song I didn't know what to expect, but after the verse started I knew it would be a message to this song. Lyric wise & deliverance was on point and the production made this a great song.
United States, Mississippi, Gulfport
