That was awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross back in February! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

This song is very emotional as if you had pain in this song its is great felt I am a big fan and follower of yours Great Music and Keep up the Good work This has its own description to it its mellow sad and relating.

Cool introduction with the organ and chimes. Really depressing lyrics that seem in the background of the song. Good emotion overall in the song. The piano comes in a little loud in the mix, even though its not the primary focus of the song. Good clean recording quality and musical style. Im not so sure about the vocals yet, but its a cool style of music!

I felt drawn in to this song. We should do some work I'd like to help you make this song better. email me. maximillion.mhlongo@gmail.com I like the vocals, change up your style and this could be great. A futuristic sound could take you far. This song now, however, is poor. Great Potential though.

I wasn't really feeling this song. Unconnected. I mean it makes you feel unconnected listening. You have a few nice progressions in the chorus but that's not really enough for me to want to hear this song a second time. Or even wait for the ending which came abruptly (and happily so)

I like your style of music keep it move forward. I like your arrange and the lyrics Great job I can also listen to music and production I really like. Great job

it sounds pretty nice, but makes me want to go to sleep. it has that slow deep feeling, though since that is what it is supposed to be I would have to say that you did a pretty well job on here. brought out the emotions that I believe you were looking for. makes me feel sad

whats up with the intro? singer sounds like he's doped up or just sleepy mix level overall is low vocals are buried and prob good they are this recording sorely lacks energy and vibe and much too short

Keep making good music

Interesting music; I liked the mix of sounds, just needed something more in the arrangement. The vocals and rhyme scheme were weak. Focus on your strengths, and crack down on the vocals; you got some good stuff..just needs the right combination.

Just checked your page on Reverbnation, please be careful of plagiarism, you do have "Nights in white Satin" on your list. They are cracking down on music plagiarism, even if it is a cover or a tribute. Love your music, and the voice, and the rendition, keep this local best bet.

Too soft in the beginning, runs into 00:13 before it is heard. Beaut introduction once heard :) Nice voice. Reminds me of "Nights in white armor". Good harmony too! Relaxing music! Not enough of a clip to find out how it goes. If the same continues it could become monotonous. See you reverbnation/taba. Good luck!