mix it better. the song is generally annoying as well.

God bless you and keep up the good! :)

Keep on doing your music, one day you will hit it big, step up each on tel you get the big one. Tommy CCT

clean your tracks..and lower your volumes... you are peaking and everything from your lyrics to the beat is distorted...I can hear that it could be a good track just not mastered well thats all... clean that up and you will be to go.. scrtachy like sound in your echo effects too.. try lowering volumes and then mixing that down again

The start makes you wonder what lies ahead in this tune, which sounds a lot like Indian music. It is strange to try to figure out what it is about. I could not hear the actual words much, but I likes the way it was produced. It is a fairly good balance, but very cloudy. The instruments are interesting and form clouds around the vocal parts which tend to be the main point, and the loudness of the vocal parts reflect some anxious singer invoking a wild mood.

The quality is terrible homie. The simple hook era is definitely coming back so you on the right track. You start losing energy. It was live at first then you kinda die out a lil.but you aint gettin far with this type of quality.

reduce the feedback on the delay, im hearing alot of distortion on "I" of "I can". Better limiting could also be done.

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Keep up the work

Old skool but fresh crisp vocals and music cool great song

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