This is a very sad song to me. When You think of it the main thing I picked up was a young man who did not get to see his father much. Similar to me this is why I continued to listen. Not into folk music like that. Good story though, I can see what is said. So paint the view of your world the way you see it. Sometimes art is the only way to express your feelings. Good Guitar wish it had some drums on it.

Good vibe hear. Ure from Cali I almost seen the sunshine as you were singing good work perfecto

For some reason I don't understand you accent! either that or the vocals werent mixed clear enough! I like the tone of voice and t he quality of the music. It's a little slow for me and could possibly use more instruments, not really to make it faster, but to pop out more in certain parts of the song.

i could do a "nileross" review "awesome! come check my music at.... blah blah blah me me me nicely played acoustic the lack of any other instrumentation leaves this effort wanting for more there needs to be breaks for other instruments to help tell the story nice scratch pad idea but this toon needs serious consideration w/ arranging

Liked the guitar, the breathiness of your voice. Feel as if it needed to build a little more as the song progressed perhaps by adding more instruments. Liked it !

That was awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross back in February! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

Very nicely done! I will look forward to hearing more.

Nice feeling of your on the song, well done.

Just can't get with this. Sounds weak by even James Taylor's wide eyed sensitivities. The songwriting just isn't appealing or inspired to me; it's 2nd rate wimp folk. The music has nothing interesting to push it along, and the lyrics are just goofy, in my opinion.

a beautiful ballad. nicely played and sung. good luck with it.