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Hip Hop / Pop / R&B
Nice I think this song is really nice. The whole song is well put together. The audio and production... more Nice I think this song is really nice. The whole song is well put together. The audio and production quality sounds awesome. You really did your thing on this track. I can definitely see your career going very far if you can continue to make this type of music. I love the fact that you show passion in your song and that speaks in volumes to the listeners. Keep up the hard work! You definitely have what it takes to go to the top. Good luck.
Well don, Sir! I love it. LOVE IT! Anything with Angels or such themes are potent and attract my att... more Well don, Sir! I love it. LOVE IT! Anything with Angels or such themes are potent and attract my attention. Your thoughts in this are wonderful and easy to listen to over and over again! I hope you gain mass appreciation for this poetic masterpiece!
Mic Shannon... This song has a nice flow you got going to it. Your lyrical skills are definitely on ... more Mic Shannon... This song has a nice flow you got going to it. Your lyrical skills are definitely on point and your delivery is energetic and believable. So I can't give you nothing but props for that. But now let's get to "the real" part which is the part people don't like to hear about their songs. Now these aren't negative, just areas I noticed that could be better, different or taken out based on my experience as a DJ and producer, my opinions and basically the energy of the song. Hopefully you'll use it as a tool and not be offended. First thing is I think it would've been a better song if you did the song without trying to be in key (as in singing). Even if you had just broke away from it for a lil bit and did it just here and there instead of through the whole song. By doing that, you gave the entire song a "dated" time stamp on it almost. Sounds like early 2000's songs. Within the chorus I noticed you giving it a lil hype feel in your back up vocals, but you sound very much like a "back in the day T.I." while doing it. Again putting a dated feel on the song. But I guess depending on your age (as in the listener), those might have been the best music era for them so maybe there is an audience for that style. Plus they say things always come back around with a twist and maybe this is it. But you can not call this Hip Hop... This is Rap only, all the way. These are just my thoughts. And again it's a nice song. I just think it would've fit a lil better for you if you didn't soften it up with that singing style. I'll give you an example of how you softened it up by doing that style... Nelly. True he has made hits and money, but that's mostly the earlier Nelly material. Hopefully you understand what I'm getting at. If that's the audience you're going for, you're on the right path. I'd like to hear you on some "harder hitting", 808 bass heavy Trap or Boom Bap style track. You have made skills. I just think your music could be holding you back on this one. Again, this isn't bad... It just feels dated. I have those songs as well. And sometimes it's hard to face that fact because you keep thinking it might work. Hopefully it does. But, sometimes you have to hear what listeners are telling you. They are your audience. And you're not going to please everyone with every song you make. Always remember that. Keep pushin'.