That's a dope joint yo keep it up yo ,follow me on twitter @katapilaa let's talk more and make music yea

Nice yo. You can do a bit more with the production. It just comes with experience. Keep pushing towards greater thoughts.

very dope and lyrical I like it Just get a better mix maybe nice beat and overall production

That was awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross back in February! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

Cool... Old school sounding but cool. I hear some Wu-Tang in there. The flow is ok. I think a little more production and you have something! Keep it up!

Just because you requested but not my style of music, i dont know about rap or hip hop.

you have a good flow and rap. The chorus is awful, sorry. Keep working at it and the production as the backing sounds too tinny.

I was in music third to 12 grade and i was taught to let your voice flow like the waves. smooth and it the song call for rough sound do it without the provanity.Our children need road models we have enough of trouble kids in this world. St. Louis

this sounds good g.. . keep it coming. . every one will have there opinion but only you can make it happen for you. The music will get better in time but right now it's important to sound like your self

Keep working you'll get it right don't worry

I gotta agree with the haters mentioned at the beginning of this shitty song; you can't rap, have low intelligence and class, and this track is boredom at it's truest.