Intro was good nice song to much provamity yes the world is crazy and you need to work on delivering the song. Strong message but I need to feel it also. St. Louis,Mo

Not my style of music, i dont know about rap or hip hop, just because you requested i think the vocals needs more strenght on the singing feeling.

nice song strong message

This a a musical testimony of truth. I hope you succeed at your dreams. Good message cuz this world is crazy. :} Tis is hip hop Thanks for the listen.

That is awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/katapila And please let's talk more Follow me on twitter too @katapilaa Pretoria, South africa

i think your lyrics are deep beat is also very nice, it needs a little work it needs needs to be mixed back down professional style. But overall man keep up the good work. check me out on https://www.reverbnation.com/njbeast?profile_view_source=header_icon_nav

That was awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross back in February! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

It's a shame, because the music on track had some potential with the right person to rhyme over it..but instead it was some annoying, cliched, abrasive, no class, illiterate garbage over it.

Your grooving, nothing for me to really say, perhaps if it were me, I would squuze a bit more out of the mix. Overall nice work Luckde Luchi. All the Best WC.

I like the beat, it's chill. I feel ya lyrics. I like that your talking about something real, besides, money bitch's etc. Overall I like this song, Good Job and Good Luck. Note: Lets connect on social network. Facebook;https://www.facebook.com/luckee.luchiano?ref=tn_tnmn#!/pages/Luckee-Luchi/183962798334537 Twitter;@760_Luch Ps work on your hooks

COULD BE A DOPE SONG ...JUST NEEDS TO BE MIXED PROPERLY ...6/10