As a person with a strong music ear, I will say this. This was not the worst, but it was not the best. I feel that it definitely can be better and I sense that you have what it takes to really push the vocals on this song. I like the song but it definitely can use a bit of tweaking with the vocals just a bit. Even myself as a singer and songwriter, I am always improving because I know I have music that is not always the best but not the worst either. I like the song but again, I think it does need some work.

this has way to much going on in the music area, none of it is being given the chance to be heard, from the beginning of the song its clashing, and your voice needs to come up and should have so back up singers in it of you. when you begin talking is to low as well, need to bring the mic up all the way through this song...do u want to be heard or not, raise up your voice! if needed look up some simple song techniques to strenghten your lungs to be able to sing at a higher tone, much more i could say to help improve your quality, but i would have to charge you, smile, it will show dramatically, give your beat time to sing as well the background time to be heard as the simpliest tune and your on your way but at this point the best i can give you is a 1 star, no need to share this, this is for you, and comeback to me afterwards with the next song, i would love to hear it.

Ciao sono Lorenzo Puma ho ascoltato la tua musica bravo bella musica, il suono e ottimo voce ottima la tua musica e di qualità si sente e poi questo tipo di musica a me piace,ora andrò ad ascoltare anche le altre tue canzoni e mi iscrivo anche nella tua pagina,se ti fa piacere ti puoi iscrivere anche nella mia pagina e ascoltare anche le mie canzoni,su questo sito si può sentire tanta musica a presto

Canzone strana sembra un po buttata lì con cose che si alternano senza senso e note un po disarmonia non saprei cosa dire anche le voci sono da rivedere e la registrazione non è ottimale riprova un altra volta

Hi We look forward to the time when the Power of Love will replace the Love of Power. Then will our world know the blessings of peace.Love and kindness are never wasted. They always make a difference. They bless the one who receives them, and they bless you, the giver.The best love affairs are those we never had. Thanks and good luck!

One of the things I enjoy most about Number One Music artists is the newfound ability to hear music from around the world by singers who I'd never have the chance to listen to otherwise. That, in itself, is a great thing. Here, with this song a throwback to a 70's middle eastern vibe is a unique approach today. I appreciate the effort that goes into creating new music and Ophelia - keep living the dream!

Sounds like an audio sample. The unique vocals of the singer is spontaneous and lively. The lyrics come from the heart and the message of the chorus makes the song complete. It isn't perfect arranged but the song has some special moments. Overall a good example for ambitous performance.

you recorded yourself huh? doubling a flat note doesn't put in key. you are a cute girl but you need voice lesson along the lines of pitch. and don't ever ever ever ever rap on a track like this or any other track. You have potential to be an artist one day but rn your are not an artist, you are trying to be an artist. go back and try again it is an exciting and supportive no for me. the music sounds like out the 90's Paula abdul era you need newer sounding music. If you are still reading which i doubt do not give up keep going i was bad before i figured it out and became good. so i'm not trying to discourage you but it sucks. but don't stop you have to fail to become great. Gave 2 stars for effort. Don't hate me and do not stop creating and writing. idk maybe have someone else demo the stuff you write? just a thought.

Hi according to what I heard your song needs much more clearer theme and polishing also mastering, your voice and Melody and the music all together are not clear, and I think your lyrics are not hearable enough, your voice is pretty faded so you can't really understand what you're saying.. Music is nice, sound could be much better, but altogether doesnt match im afraid. Keep it up, working on it all it will be better once. I think your idea is nice just needs clearing. Thanks

The vocal is in the background and sounds very itchy and over reverbed. I honestly didn't understand what I was listening to. I'm a vocal producer also so overall it wasn't very pleasant on the ear.

I can hardly follow the lyrics. Maybe it is because of collision of frequencies of vocals and instruments. At 1:15 there is a second voice coming in too loud. Mix this with lower volume so that is is less dominant, not so crushing in. I think you do not use a pitch correction tool for vocals, I think this could help in some parts, where you do not "speak" but sing longer notes. All in all the song has no musical tension, the sound is monotone without highs and lows. You could put in breaks. Sometimes a short emptiness can bring the effect, that you grab the listener's attention to prevent that the listener gets bored.

I Like the Backtrack of the music i think it is really vibey getting some jazzy vibes from it aswell as some cultural vibes. i like it alot. but you need to fix your voice on the track as its not too clear and it sounds like you are muffled and the backtack takes over your voice. other than that everything is perfect. its really vibey. im nodding along to it. i like it near the end is my favourite part. keep working on your music and try to edit or get whoever is editing to mix it a bit better and make your voice sound louder and clearer. Great stuff Miss Ophelia. god bless you have a nice rest of your day!