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The Well of Tears review

I'll start by saying, all in all, not a bad song. When I write a review, I always assume the artist is either trying to get a record deal or a publishing deal. So my comments are based on this assumption. When dealing with almost everyone in the industry that can help you move forward with any success, you have to follow what their 'format of the day' is. One of the current things is shorter songs (around three to three and a half minutes) and you are right in there with 3:35. Another key point is trying to end your song with the hook or title. You've done that also. Then we need to get to the chorus as soon as possible. The people listening to your song normally won't spend three to four minutes of their busy day to hear the entire song unless it catches their attention quickly. They want to hear the hook as soon as possible. Here is where you could possibly rework your song to get it out sooner. It seems you go from your verses to a B section and then verse again before the first sign of a chorus. If you can remix that it may help. I would also try and get a stronger track behind your vocals. When you record, you are putting out something that will be there forever! So, use the best players you can on it. Listen closely to your song and pick out the weakest part or parts and consider having a stronger player on that part to make it the very best it can be. Good luck moving forward with you music. Keep writing!


Nice hard guitar lead, I like the production sound and the 80's-90's rock feel of the track. I can feel the heart in this showing you've put in some dedicated work on your art. I love the message More artist should study the roots of their culture of art more to be better at their own art. Keep up the good work and stay in the lab creating new material to stay fresh and on your toes. If you're ever looking for a hip hop collaboration hit me up I'm versatile. Peace!

your song

hi there guys, thanks a lot for sending me your song to review it. I like this song, very nice made. The voice is rare but special and goes well with this type of music, you remind me The Cure. The guitars sounds great on both channels, great stereo field, the drums and the bass are also sounding great in the middle. I love the lyrics too, very well written, the guitar solo is great and the sound is very penetrant. I could hear every detail inside the song, great productions guys, keep that job up, greetings from Germany, Alfredo

Not much to say, I like it :)

Very nice guitar and solo that gives a good dynamic. I think it's one of those songs that the more you listen to it and the more you like it. I first listened to the music and then read the lyrics that fload very well with the music. The voice is not the typical "perfect voice" but I think it goes very well with the type of music. Maybe I would have add more choruses? But it's just my personal taste and not a big thing. I've liked this song :)


I like the melody and the music choice, however the music is slightly louder than your vocals. Other than that I think that this song is very catchy. Hope to hear more from you, keep pushing.

Not my style

I wanted to pass on reviewing your song because this is not my style of music that I like. You list it as rock - it's not rock - I don't know what it is. Nice sounding lead guitar. Vocals need improvement

ballata originale

bella ballata che fa capire tutto senza sapere il testo si ascolta volentieri con la voce adatta a questo genere quindi tutto strumenti e voce al posto giusto continuate cosi' perché' e' un pezzo orecchiabile!


Niçe guitar intro. I feel the Songs sounds a like a style Ive heard from the eighty. Which is a good thing. Interesting use of vocals and a good lyrical narrative, along with rock guitar solo make this song easy to listen to .

right track

very nice song and chord progressions, its reminiscent of an tune of the 1980s which i love, the vocal FX are very retro aswel which i love. only thing that slightly concerns me is the vocal strength, it kind of elevates in some places and im not sure if im fan of that. none the less, still a nice song and worth a listen

Good Vibes

Your Song was very good I like it????I see there is a lot of work in it. The beat and the Voice combine good.Check my Music If you like Latin Pop Music. Hope you like and share with your Friends????cheers from Germany

Runs like a champion

The song The Well Of Tears from Zap & The Wires begins with a smooth end easy to follow intro. It is like the good old times of Rock when everybody was listening to it. The Journey continues by being amused of the clean played song and the good old times of rock where in my thoughts by listening to this song. Remember when many bands played music like this and everywhere you went you could hear it. This song is an easy to listen and very simple song for everybody who likes guitar music in an easy way. Enjoy listening this song. The Cows

Blues modern

This is a good rock psychedelic song, but there's a blues background inside. The voice is spontaneous and quiet, while the audio is a little low to listen. It's a professional job. Well done.

The well of tears.

The well of tears. Ooh I love the sound, your music so good and I'm in love with your genre. This definitely should be on ma playlist. Thank you for making such great sounds. I will keep listening.

In MY Opinion

Greetings, Thank you for choosing me to review your work, I count it an honor to be included in such a task. My hat is off to you and anyone willing to step out and share their gift, talent and love of music to the public. Be it a musician, singer, song writer, actor and so-on. I myself, via 40 some years of experience in the fields, on the road, in the studio, radio, TV, video, and management, consider myself to be a seasoned musician, singer, song writer, studio-sound tech/engineer/ owner/operator, stage manager, find it sometimes hard/difficult and perhaps not even fair to sit in a seat, voicing My Opinion concerning another's creative efforts. Especially in certain genres of music I am not all that familiar with concerning very important elements that make up and meet the required standards to justify the various levels of ratings and grades. So, in saying ALL that, I will limit myself to MY Opinion concerning the quality of the work according to My ears, and the standards I have been familiarized with thru-out the years. I hold to the old - saying " Beauty Is In The EAR of The Beholder ... LOL. The sound quality of the recording over-all is very crisp and bright and clear, I really enjoyed the guitar work.Think about a little less process or another type of process being used on the vocals. Vocals are sort of muddy - not clear and crisp. The mix levels let me know who was still in charge of this song. Very easy to sit back and listen to. I mean no offense in any part, I myself take all feedback and use it as a tool toward my next project. I pray you feel the same way. Either way, I say to you, keep doing what you do, keep kicking and enjoying what you do. I tell folks all the time for many years. When it stops being FUN, then it's time to stop, and stand back and think about what we are doing, why we are doing it, how we are doing it, what we and others are getting out it. Is it what we want, and how we want it. IF NOT. what are willing to do from there? Thank you again for asking MY OPINION. Johnny
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