From the very beginning of the song you limited your audience with your lyrics. The "n" word to be exact. You can rap about specific people without being specific. In other words, make your lyrics more universal. The ultimate goal is to reach a lot of people not just a few. "KEEP THE VISION" ~MVP~

Today I just randomly clicked on a song to check out and got lucky when "Late Nights" came on. The smooth beat grabbed me right away, then the "keep hustling" mentality, projected by Viewboi Shine sounded like he knew exactly what he wanted to let 'em know. All the makings of a song with true potential and pretty hot all the way around. Catchy hook, cool lyrics, and a laid back gangster ass beat...what more could you ask for?

Sounds good but too familiar to other people's flows. come up with your own guarantee you make a hit. Not hatin just need that original. The rest are a some a dozen. Make your own sound make that new sound, got to be original cuz that's the only way you'll be able to stand out from the rest of these so called rappers. Keep banging..

Kool song keep working nice song sound like a New York artist I see your from South Carolina but you have that up top sound to your flow when will music be available to public it needs to be heard.

I love the beat. I like the lyrics they really are inspiring. This will make a nigga get a bag. Gotta work for what you want in life and let ergophobia ass niggas know that lol. Get money by all means..., i dont sell drugs or rob niggas but at the same i will work to make it. Im from Bishopville, SC we gotta link up make some music. Fwm #GNSW #BMB fire as song put that mf on coast2coast or something

I really like the track its got potential. What i would focus on is the overall sound of the song as far as the engineering. yo song can be the best track out but if the quality aint meeting then its gona look weak compared to a radio quality track. Its like buying sum gucci an runnin it through the mud then tryna sell it. Keep at though yo shyt nice!

Just remember this if you get lost along the way: Anything worth having doesn't come easy. So don't turn back around. Don't give up. As you work to achieve your most ambitious goals, push yourself to keep moving forward

Whats good fam. I'm really feeling this track right here. The beat is smooth but its hitting at the same time. You got a nice flow and you switched it up through the verses. The quality of the track is mixed real good too! Keep Working my Dude!

WHERE DEM BITCHES@ (Check out my music on N1M and Reverbnation under SplitEndz The Profit here in Los Angeles). And yes, we meaning Bugleblack who is number 4 in ranks for Los Angeles HipHops category, and ya boy SplitEndz The Profit see you on here. I just dropped some more pimpin on here. Song titled WHERE DEM BITCHES@ Its a Slapper. We just did a performance on stage for AndreNickatina Halloween party in Los Gatos

This track is nice. It has a nice smooth beat, sound a little bit like Future flavor. The vocals are nice as well however lyrics on robbing brother and doing whatever to make money need revision (coon stuff). The track has potentials for moving up the charts. Looking forward to more from this Artist

This is a great track, beat lyrics and delivery, this is the first time i have listened to Viewboi shine and i was very impressed. Going forward i plan to look for his music and hope we can collaborate in the future

 This makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real

the beat and the lyrics are the movement of this song. The words portrayed shows the passion in the music. It kinda has a future feel just a little less professional but other than that it sounds great! repping out here in cleveland for ya

I'm diggin this song homie. I got a couple of songs dealing with the same topic. You going in on this joint though. Makes me feel like I need to hustle harder lol. Would love to collaborate someday.

What good G most def feeling that banger g very amazing g keep up the great work I don't no if u have a video to this 1 but if not u should drop 1 asap g jus saying this mf banging once more keep up the great work pimping n I look forward to calab with u soon g salute

Definitely sense the hunger in the rappers verse. Professional sound and production. Hard hitting beat matches the flow of the artist. Motivational and Inspirational work out hype music.

Concept is cool, But the tempo and flow is too similar to a song i've heard before. Switch it up a bit and create your own image so people can be a fan of you and not whats already trending man

I like the message of the song so many people just want to talk about what they want but won't go and do it. That is hard work and i feel it. I really feel the song just got to get that production up on it for tough critics you dig.

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