Very well done track well put together and the flow is on point the hook and the feel of the track is very radio friendly and energetic. The only thing is with your track you could played with the flow, more charisma and ad-libs. Use more generalized and not just yourself also use the different depths of your voice to differentiate the tone of your flow, your shit is right stay on top #GM # shattas FALCONY

Fire, bars, quality.. it's all there. I haven't worked with an American artist yet so let's get it done asap! Our styles would go together well for real. Keep releasing shit like this fam, you got it

Well done with this track tho . Nice rhythm nice beat . It reminds me of the good old tracks we used to listen to before everything got electronic and different . Good job on the vocals . Keep it up

First off the energy on here is nuts! Beat is mean and the hook is money. Since this wasn't a lyrical song it was good because you kept your flow and that kept me engaged throughout the song. All in all this is a good record for you. Keep grinding, you going places my dude.

Keep pushin and shoot for the planets bro!!! the destination is unlimited, if you interested in doin collabs hit me up and lets work. Im from Cali but im in Louisiana nii.. my style is unorthodoxed

I like this a lot! production was definitely on point. Keep it up and subscribe so I can keep up with your music and you can keep up with ours as well. Look forward to hearing some new music from you!

I really like you're metaphors and similes. You got some tight rhymes too. I definitely can tell you been rapping for a good while. Its all love. You got some skills and this is coming from an artist that is all about lyrics and been rapping for 15 years. I got to give props man. Keep doing your thing.

everything was dope you just need a lil better mixing n some other thing evened out but i think the beat wa A1. you should try diffrent type of beat try a more calm flow. if you ever need a hot ft hmu

Bruhh your delivery reminds me of Danny West coast but you got yourself your own lane to drive...lyrical you off the charts keep going hard my friend .the beat is great just looking for something crazy...808 type hip hop music Looking for something crazy overall you good

flow was coo and beat nice, until that drop pimp. you on beat but that beat sounds like throws off the flow. second verse go hard tho, all the way solid. nice flow and nice bars but you just really aint saying much. a lot of good ideas and phrases i wish you would follow up on your ideas, kill a punchline. touched on your people hating and you being arrogant but why are they ya dig? but other than that, solid track.

I'm not sure if you would like to collab but I can guarantee you that this is by far the best song I have heard yet today and it definitely brings a lot of character out in you I feel like we can make great music all we have to do understand each other whatever we might need and then go ahead put forth an effort to try and make things happen most definitely it could be a potentially beneficial act within artists all we have to do it just make things happen both of ourfan base would probably like it

Lol dude thats a dope question , super dope track the beat is hella fire and ur skills compliment it , catchy hook 2 , not many rappers out there can say they got what it takes so keep going , never give up . deuces .