This song has good structure/arrangement, strong haunting emotional lyrics and a very good vocalist. It has all of the ingredients of a hit rock song but it needs a lot of tweeting and balancing of parts so that they do not fight each other. The first thing that needs to be understood and implemented is that in a pop or rock band the vocalist is the leader. All other elements of the band must follow, respond to and support the vocalist. This includes the arrangement and all of the other band members/musicians. In this piece the vocals need to be heard more. The vocalist has a very good voice and needs to take charge, project more and lead the band. I believe that once this is done that this song can be transformed to a mega hit. Just let the vocals/lyrics be heard clearly and everything will fall into place. This song has potential. All the best.

Bring the vocal up in the mix, or guitar is too loud. Good singing! Oh damn, the mix went to shit on the chorus. Lay off those compressors people.

maybe a little lacking in emotion or energy. vocals have potential but everything else just seemed lacking in fullness. very slow song.

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the intro is too long and boring (1:40) oops, sorry the whole song is boring, busted tempo, vocal is a nerve-racking frills, the gitarsound and playing are totally stereotype, the text is infantile, but i think these things are defect of this music style

sounds gr8..keep up the good work!!!!

good music great singer..she needs to be up in the mix , especially in the beginning..You really have a good idea of how to create and record an good song congrats

Decent song....it lost me when distorted guitars came in...I would try overdrive or turn down the value on distoration...otherwise decent effort

Nice guitar sound and laid back intro good song.

This song rocks!!!!! I have been listening to it over and over again. Awesome guitar. Vocals are great. You could go a little raspier if you wanted to; the song would sustain it. But you really should take advantage of that guitar part that turns the song suddenly at 1:15, 16, 17, 18 into what it is. You cut off too soon. Sing it again, but this time hold the note all the way through the transition. That will sound awesome.

Good Music