This track follows a classic format most associated with pop rock and that is fine. A fair mix of a song which could be a real cracker. I'd like to hear it again after a remix with a suitable producer... This I believe is the main reason many songs don't smack you like they should.. it's in the mix! Most of us don't have the cash it takes to only occupy ourselves with the writting and recording, we have to also produce and mix and of course the biggest horror, MASTERING! Nice one Shawn, keep going...

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I think this is a cool song but I would probably say the production could be better for you. I like the concept of the song and it has good lyrics and good instrumentals. And that's all I can think of on the topic. I write pop rock and I think it does fit the genre and I would definitely like to hear more of this band. Keep up the good work and thanks for the tune it was a good one! Take it easy! Rock on!

You have identity and it's one of the mimostst importante things for pau attention without se be low about ethic,good comportments and these really essencial stuffies for us humans.i an so so in english.I record with big production my First song in english days ago so i don't understand well the letters at First time without legenda But sometimes i have the sensation and i une It with some phrases of and i know the essence of and i SUCH like as the resto of the elementos in Ur personal style of a kind of trepp metal pop rock music in my point of view.WE HAVE TO STILL!Congrats!

Ideal musical arragement and poetic lyrics make this stand out like the big event it is. Amazing vocals and the ending melodies rose up over and over again which was most effective. Excellent bridge verse to finish it up. Simply brilliant work!

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Good morning sir I just got through listening ???? to your song I really appreciate it and great music I love all types and different styles of music... Never be afraid to take chances in your music never stop sharing.. Keep me posted on any new music ???? that you are working on Have a wonderful day and may God continue to bless you in all your endeavors... Enjoy the rest of your week and keep on rocking out stay on your grind no matter what peace ✌️.

Very fun sounding interesting song. Good recording, and I like the vocals. You can hear all instruments well. Might have a little Spin Doctors influence, but either way a really good song. Keep up the great stuff. Best Wishes! "Atomic Energy Society"

Looking for a steady taxi Down the runway before leaving the ground? Well fasten you’re seat belt because this introduction is straight at it with no messing about up up and away. Once in the air the pilot reassured comes over the tannoy and allows you to lean back and listen in peace, well relative peace. The riff continues happily throughout and you can’t help but love it and completely hooked, sort of hook that keeps you up and playing airborne. Great job mate

Hey very nice work on this Song , try sending some demos i think you have a big chance to make it . Keep working on your music. God bless . Hard work pays off try to creat something more original.

I wasn’t really feeling it. But nice beat and the energy is amazing on the track. Keep shooting for your dreams. Your time is coming. Look forward to hearing more of your music in the future.

ok Great song and catchy Vocals are really good the guitar riff while good seems like its in a different room and the rhythm guitar while both competent in my opinion need slight centering in the mix not like they are playing in separate rooms with no bleed in to the right or left track .. I.E. pan the guitars position on an imaginary stage want to hear them on left and right not just Left and Right. Great ingredients for this track Keep up the good work.. Press play give Shawn a listen

Nice vocal lead, I like the live sound and mix of drums. A little bit of a classic mix showing you've done your homework on your art. More artist should study the roots of their culture of art to be better at their own art. Keep up the good work and stay in the lab creating new material to stay fresh and on your toes. If you're ever looking for a hip hop collaboration hit me up I'm versatile. Peace!

I like guitar rock like this. But the mix could be done better. The guitars sound like from 60s. Today's guitars sound more heavy. Songwriting is ok, but your song needs a smashing refrain. Only "ok" is not enough. Try to sing that in chorus and let it stand out from the rest of your song.

Very nice shawn love the sound music sound really good Iove the verses it reminds me something john Lennon will sing i want to.wish you the best of luck my friend Steve and warren from voodoo dancer

Not a bad riff and overall sound. The intro should be shortened. It isn't interesting enough to be as long as it is and I think you may lose the listener before the vocal comes in. There is definitely a need for some kind of lift in this, as it is repetitive. Possible ideas a key change, a bridge that goes into a higher line in the scale than the rest of the song or a guitar solo that is a completely different chord progression. I am no expert, but these are things I would personally do to make the song better. Maybe a bit more edge on the vocals, but if you are going for a late sixties psychedelic feel, then you have accomplished that sound.

This song took my attention from the first second with the good riff in the intro. Verse sounded also nice but I was expecting much more from vocals. It was a bit laim but I hoped that it would get more wild while the song continues. Chorus was basically the same as intro but with the vocals. Again I wanted to more violent vocals that would match the riff and sound of the song. After the first chorus song continues to repeat it self and it really doesnt go anywhere, it kind of repeat it self until the end. I would re-think vocal melody and also add C-part to this song. For vocal I would approach it more like Nirvana did. Very good idea on this song, but I would do it again to make it even more interesting.