Monochrome Moon

Scribe And Sage

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Amazing song

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The music had great sounds and tones that really grabbed my attention. Vocals were on point and complimented the music and style. I really enjoyed it a lot. Just wanted to give you a little feedback didn’t have anything negative to say about it at all. Thanks for your time

United States, Arkansas, Mountain Home

Great Song!

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Hello out there! I just finised listening to your song! It is awesome! Good work! It is well produced, great vocals and arrangement. The energy is really upbeat! It a super refreshing piece.

United States, California, San Francisco

I like this sound !

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Such an emotional voice, such a fine guitar playing. The lyrics touched me so much, and the overal production is perfect. One of the best tunes I heard for a while. Wishing you all the best for for your promissing career.

France, Paris

venomous music review

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FIRST BIG UP MAINE LIKE THIS EASY LISTING NICE VIBE RADIO/CAR VIBES CAN GO COMMERCIAL GOOD ENERGY WELL WRITTEN LIKE HOW IT STARTS WITH THE GUITAR AND THOUGHT OUT THE TRACK HIGHLY RECOMMENDED CATCHY AS WELL YOU CAN REACH A WIDER AUDIENCE IF YOU WANT TO NICE ONE SCRIBE AND SAGE

United Kingdom, BIRMINGHAM

I'm a fan

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Ok this Is one of those songs that start off slow, and ends really strong. The vocals are solid, this kinda reminds me of the song Little Lion Man, very folksy, very acoustic, this is one of the better songs on this platform. What really had me hooked was the change upon the song, I didn't see that coming, and that made me stay with the song to see what else you would do. The music was on point as well, if I didn't say before, I'm a fan, good job

United States, Pennsylvania, York

review

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thank you for allowing us to give you a review the way song start was nice we like the song from the start to the end the mixing and mastering producing of this song was done well we really like the artist voice the beat as well what the artist was singing about and the lyric to song were positive song has a message and can be good for many avenues look forward to hearing more

United States, Georgia, Decatur

Well Built Song

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Most obviously, u know how to write a song. Good, solid structure. Very strong chorus. After hearing one time, I can sing your chorus AND at least hum along with the verses. Very nice breakup with the bridge and the "arm flailing" rythm of the drums exiting the bridge with the musical interlude before the end out chorus repeats. I loved how those drums sounded like someone hitting on a pillow taking a tantrum. Fit the lyrics. Also, the musical interlude after the bridge was a nice surprise. I was expecting the drums to go right into the final chorus/es, but "what's this"? Nice surprise. Ok, let's talk about the lyrics. Pretty obvious you are a word Craftsman. Guessing you write poetry. Perhaps you wrote poetry before you started writing songs. Wonderful use of imagery. NO CLICHE LINES... THANK YOU!!!! Though I disagree with the premise of your song, I personally believe in hope because I read the last chapter of The Book, and hope wins triumphantly, this is a very well written, impactful, memorable, song. Blessings. I pray it is well received, because it is well earned. And your pipes are pretty good, too!

United States, Texas, Lewisville

God Would Like It

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Good Cristian rock with not too complex chord progression, I am not a specialist in this genre, but I think that's how it should be to make the people more focus on the lyrics. And the lyrics are strong with pictures to dive into a church event (sorry if this wording is too harsh, but I have no religion). Melody is a little monotone, but I think it should not be too complex for this song should be a prayer. Solo instrument is too much in the background. On the other side mixing it more in the foreground it could make the sound more aggressive. I don't know, I only go with my personal taste.

Austria, Vienna

Hawaii on a beach

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Definitely smooth made me feel relaxed fflowed well Keys might have been a little to loud and mix But not enough that average Listener would Notice Harmonizing vocal could have been a little upBut all in all I love the song did a great job and I'll be listening to it periodically thank you

United States Minor Outlying Islands, Olympia

Outstanding Lyrics

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Very catchy song with genuinely well played acoustic guitar. Very dynamic voice of the singer and vocal projection. He has a great talent to give an account in words about someone or something, including all the relevant characteristics, qualities, or events. Imaginative transitions from the stanza to the impressive chorus makes the song rich and creative. Engaging drums in the chorus forces the music constantly on a higher level. Piano and acustic guitar increases this song, but all additional instruments really stand out and implements a great feeling for music. Professional arrangement and recording very good mixed and overall perfect mastered. It´s a quintessence of contemporary music with acoustical elements although influenced by indie-rock. This song could be a radio hit and I´m sure you will also like to add him. Let others know your recommedation.

Germany, Hamburg

Excellent lyrics/meaning/musicality/

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Love the beginning, get hooked right away! The lyrics are amazing monochrome moon watches over me, no going back, seriousness is appropriate, encouraging, making feel that maybe there is hope while sleeping but reality is different. Seems attempting to move forward despite all due to music then having an upbeat sound. Powerful, no happy ending tomorrow....eek...ends depressing. Done very well. Takes you up and down. I wish it ended with some hope as it seemed to indicate by tempo increasing. I liked it anyway:) great production, voice, lyrics. It should hit, but then again everything that is great needs more, sad to say...I hope you do well with this. Really love all of it! Go team!

United States, New York, Pittsford

where do all em blin coins go

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this is very..how would say..either like it or switch off..vocs too loud see..imo..so if someone dont like the vocs ..they switch off why have em so loud man? dont mean its not good like..just kinda overpowerin...producers alwys put the vocs too loud..i dunno why they do that..maybe to try an discredit yer music? possibly. the vocs are good now..an its very well produced. and good vocs too..an words...a lot goin on here..with the right production this could be on the radio..wait..nah they like this stuff on the radio..they love loud vocs. very well crafted song. good job. monochrome moon. yeh. 10stars

Ireland, Dublin

Lunar Alt. Indie

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This is a professionally performed alt/indie piece. Starts with reverby acoustic chording and vocal. Drums kick in on the chorus hook. (Nice arrangement device to build the song). The chorus kind of ends “hanging” and the second verse starts. (Another nice arrangement device leaving the listener wanting more of the chorus). Second verse backed by acoustic and a Tom Tom sounding drum. (Song progresses with additive percussion). Verse ends hanging and goes to chorus-which again ends hanging. 3rd verse accompanied by piano closed high hat -ooh-oohs solo kind of catchy not too cluttery melodic line maybe a little of mandolin sound -into chorus with the same style of melodic riffing, maybe a bit of mandolin sound, in background used as a build. Chorus ends again hanging -sound fades to guitar playing single note riffing (which sounds like it was previously buried in the mix). This is a well crafted tune. The vocals and instrumentals sound professional. Fine job by the artist.

United States, Florida, Orlando

Song

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Nice song I can tell you took your time with creativity I would like for u to join my network so I can share more of your music and you share more of mines I wish you the best luck in the future god bless

United States, North Carolina, Henderson

Monochrome moon

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Great song wow nice this is AWESOME .this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over.............................they the song was put together is very unique..........................just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the drums and guitars were played perfectly........................can't say enough about this song ...................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you.........................

United States, New York, Middle village

review by Osirus B

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united states maine Christian rock christian pop Electronica ... Monochrome moon by Scribe And Sage yes i like this music its fun with a pop feel to it and i really like the kick drum and the gitar playing .. the slow built up to the main riddim is really good as the singer say - we can buy the wind that chances never taken hiding a thousand bits of fear under the sheets that god forsaken - watching it all just dissapear - i shuffle through 1 more dress reversal living to please the status que expressing when perfume lead me unchange for the first time it seems that im alone chorous = OH MOTHER FROM MOON WATCHES OVER ME THOSE NEON LIGHT STAR WHO SHADES ARE GRAY MOTHER FROM MOON WATCHES OVER ME hey i really like these lyrics - this is a good lively song

United Kingdom, Birmingham

Luna Monocromática...

Escucho una idea bien estructurada; sin embargo, detecto problemas en la métrica vocal que son muy evidentes al inicio de la canción. La razón por la cual me llamó la atención es precisamente el escuchar una guitarra acústica en diálogo con la voz. El tema es muy ligero y creo que en la parte de los coros es donde mejor se oye... Usar la guitarra acústica al inicio, me parece una muy buena decisión sin duda... solo creo que en las estrofas no es necesaria tanta complejidad vocal. Escucho una agrupación musical muy bien consolidada y creo que un poco de practica y teoría musical formal, no harían mucho daño... ¡Felicidades por este trabajo tan bien estructurado! y a seguir mejorando los detalles que es lo que hace al verdadero artista. ... Saludos desde México!!

Mexico, D.F.

great sound

a very pleasent refrain for this song who reach to dance with a very good sond of guitar and the right rate in the execution whith also different part in this song a midle one calm to listen more the refrain

France, Auriol

christian pop

christian pop che decolla con un bel motivo ben cantato e orecchiabile e originale cambio di voce che arricchisce la canzone che e' gran bella e si ascolta volentieri grandi voci ben unite nel ritornello e complessivamente un bel pezzo arrangiamento favoloso per questo grande pezzo e grandi cantanti questo ritornello ti prende veramente e bel finale con questa chitarra sfumata bravi

Italy, dalmine bg

Demote.

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United States, New York, Brooklyn

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