Asian theme?! Good and original idea for Rap! Par reading? You are not Jonnyboy, but read nice, with feeling! Summa Summarum? Good and interesting song is added to my player;) I like your music! Try read hard text;) Best wishes and good luck Christian Van Boollen Contact me - vanboollen@yahoo.de vanboollen.ucoz.de

Hey, the beat is ok, the intro is cool( ambient-like, not bad). The sound is ok, recordings and mixing well done. The only thing I would say it's a "minus" is the absence of a vocal sung hook( I agree with gaelmacgregor on that)! Nice job! Keep it up! PEACE!

beat was cool...the flow was weak ...wasnt riding the beat properly. was all off beat with the rapping

cool tunes

Love the explosive intro and the the backing melody through out the rest of the song. The flow is excellent, very suggestive lyrics(which work for the most part) one part was a bit graphic which is okay. Good job.

Buena musica amigo, sigue así!!

did not like the intro but then it picked up and I really liked it. It does lack a memorable chorus or bridge but saying that it is a pretty cool track. Good stuff!