Man, good stuff. I'm a big hip hop fan. You've got a good flow for sure. I agree, different beat. But regardless your lyrics and flow are both good. keep this up. We need more good hip hop artists that are worth listening to. Nice job altogether brother!

like the beat, improve style, good use of multis, good descriptive lyrics, improving timing so that the whole flo sounds fluid,

Flow was ok. On this particular beat you really have do something that stands out. I'm kind of biased though it's a pretty typical and popular beat, with a typical concept that a lot of rappers like to roll with..... of which I don't particularly care for.

Ok I see your word play skills however, I feel like this beat didn't bring out your full fire. If you would've attacked this beat with a different feel than Jay did then you would've murdered it. But on the real you got it I look forward to hearing more tracks

nice flow over a crazy ass jay-z song.The bars just needed more word play.

The idea is good and also good voice. Second voice or choirs too low. Good rhythm and time, as well as the idea of ​​a piano synthesizer to which you would like some more variation.

I love your energy but the lyrics don't fit this beat. You have talent, just not on this beat. keep perfecting your craft....

The song is put together well and rather listenable. I liked it. The flow was good, as were the lyrics; also the backing music was excelllent also. Good job.

it was ok...flow was ok but the lyrics was not that good