Listened to this a few times, I like how you kept the bars coming, most of these guys rapping cant keep rhyming as good in their last verse as opposed to the first verse, etc Another thing I like is the flow and the sample in the beginning along with the metaphors throughout the song. Love the sports lines too

work on your delivery, it doest mattter what you say if u dont say it in an entertaining matter. work on your cadence. change it up and u will be entertaining i dont want to hear your breaths on the track. keep doing what you love though

remake is ok, could've been better as far as your lyrical game and creativity goes but i've heard worse versions keep working on it. flow needs a little work also

I Usually Don't Like Remakes But You Kept Your Flow Solid .. It Was All Real So I Understand Why You Chose This Instrumental .. & The Way You Left The Hook & Went Over It Was On Point .. I Think This Mix Was Pretty Good Over All .. I Think It Would Make A Great Mix-tape Song No Doubt .. Keep It Up Bro ..

HOLA SALUDOS DESDE ARGENTINA LA VERDAD QUE ES UNA CANCION MUY BUENA SUENA MUY BIEN Bueno aunque a muchos les parezca RARO el rap esta haciendo una revolucion a nivel mundial y argentina es uno de los paises mas importantes a nivel habla hispana POR ESO SABEMOS APRECIAR LA BUENA MUSICA . muy buenas rimas y poesia les dejamos un abrazo

This is a very cool vibe. The groove is infectious and the rap is definitely moving. The ideas that are flowing helps the track along nicely. The RnB element gives this tune another dimension entirely which was a pleasant surprise. Adding different element genres is what can separate you from being just another rapper. It gives it crossover potential and I could easily here this on the radio right now. Good job...

Great song! Like :)