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United States, New York, Brooklyn
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United States, Nebraska, Omaha
I dig title of song one of the reason why I did a review on song I see where you were going with song i see song was more personal as well I like the beat and the lyrics of the song it is something different and I like the female voice in the back ground as well the mixing and mastering of song was done well I look forward to hearing more music from you in the same genre just like this one
United States, Georgia, Decatur
I really enjoyed listening to this song, it has a nice and smooth melody and the lyrics go well along with it. I would definitely recommend this and will star it too as well. Good job and hope to hear more!
United States, Florida, Orlando
Song starts out alil slow but then builds up. Nice delivery by the artist. Could add a more stronger voice over. But overall a good song to listen to Cool vibe and still a nice overall song
United States, Saint Louis
This what’s up Very Creative Reality Music Real life pain going through the up I. Down just trying to find away to elevate to the next level of life to escape the hate all them crabs in the bucket sometimes it take so much time that you lose so many great ones on the way who we wish could be standing right next to us on that day or night that changes our lives for the best knowing we Traveled a very long way Stay Bless Stay Woke
United States, Georgia, Atlanta
it's gotta be tough to lose a loved one, specially a motherly figure. And to put that pain on record plus move an audience to feel and connect and relate and bob their heads can be a difficult task. Not too many HIT records out there about losing your grandmother. (Just wanted to set that straight before coming in with some feedback) Instrumental was soft and sad in a sweet way. Was digging it, great start. I feel like On the flow side of things I liked 2nd verse the best with some nice simple connecting rhyme schemes. Flow, overall was lacking on some bars, like it needed some punchlines, or some flipped delivery, or some strong metaphors, analogies, similes etc.that painted and Slaped us with that sadness and empty feeling! (like I mentioned above, easier said than done) But I feel those are elements of a great song or atleast one that connects with most fans most of the time. A unique perspective, great hook, verses, bridge, etc. for example, how would you have rapped if the song title was "My Last Letter to You", and it was called my last letter not just because she entered eternal zzz's but because a part of you died too. Otherwise, lower the volume on the track and make it a spoken word project where you pour your heart out and we snap our fingers in connecting with your pain. Either way, you gotta snap before we do! keep it up, one love
United States, California, Long Beach
Bro your lirics are fire trust me as you keep on the good work in your pen and paper and also even pressing harder on your recording and master you are in it to win it, its all in the matter of time and consistency. Music is a journey make yours with pride because it all starts low and grow until fans see the glow, keep building and bettering yourself bro and also believe in yourself coz that's where it starts.
South Africa, Durban
it's Twenty-Kay Lyrical-Killer ZA
it's Twenty-Kay Lyrical-Killer ZA here from South Africa and I would like to say that your music is magical keep up the good work never give up I also love the recording process as well your quality is on point
South Africa, Middleburg
heat homie nice n smooth you got a video to this one if not u should shoot one homie mos def feeling this 1 fwm beats collabs etc lets work You on spotify etc if so send melink i follow you etc salute keep mashing respect Lets work homie respect
United States, Texas, HOUSTON
I think you really got it Dawg
Yeah the song is good and chill .you got in the game with the whole new drip even if the production and engineering still got wounds. I think it's kinda catchy somehow and I'll recommend to my boys as they love my catchy stuff for sure they will like it too. And keep pushing nigga
South Africa, Polokwane
Runnen' Rebel... The beat is hitten pretty hard. It's the random congas that is throwing things off. Maybe if they were quantized (in sync/on beat) maybe they would be cool. I hear you speaking from your heart though. I believe the beginning is way too long before it gets started. I also hear you struggling to keep up with the beat in a couple of the lines in each verse. When it gets to that point, calm your style down so you can keep another air to keep things flowing on beat. And/or rewrite the lyrics to give you more space to catch your breath while flowing. I can hear where you are trying to go with the song but I think it needs some work right now. Your flow needs to be smoother. And when you are recording on several tracks to do your vocals try to have them equal with levels. Try to make your punch ins smoother so that the transition between the tracks seen like it's in one take instead of punch ins or at least make it smoother than the way you've done it on this song. The beat is hard though other than the congas not in place. Keep pushin'.
United States, Maryland, Upper Marlboro
This is a great result of great production partnered with some lyrics. The engineering on here was well executed as well. Sound like whoever recorded this did a great job as well. I was listening to this at a family get together and everyone agreed this is some good feeling music. You should really consider getting a website and getting music on some major platforms like Spotify, iTunes, Tidal, etc. I can help cause I am a graphic designer and can help market your music to a wide audience.
United States, Florida, Orlando
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United States, California, Los Angeles
wow nice some rap AWESOME what a beautiful ..........VOICE and iove the way it was sung ......................love the way the vocals are done.................this song has a really good melody lines.......................the backing vocals are amazing the way they were collaborated.................... ...simply were amazing cant say enough the way they were sung.................the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on........................ the vocals had a perfect pitch..................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you....................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again...........................
United States, New York, Middle village
???????????????? U remind me of easy e.. Keep it up.. Check me out..all platforms and streaming.. Craze MC.. You did this.. Craze MC..check me out All platforms.. $500 colab..on a song..my price at the moment. I also sell beats...original $150 sale..by more at one time an get a discount
United States, Oregon, Portland
welcome from canada here!! im not familiar with hardcore rap!! but id would definitely add more energy to your vocals!! i can feel the emotion but it could be deeper,! specially with that beat! the beat is rightfully made for your lyrics! your topics is emotional and i can feel it. the mix and mastering could be better , could add a lil bit of clarity while keeping that old school vibe in your voice!! overall there good work here!! i could ezly enjoy it!! something artist has yet to do!! keep going bro!!!
Canada, Quebec, Montreal
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United States, California, West side
The intro is long. The beat is alright. The lyrics is alright. Ur own originality. The hook is alright. This is not grammy material. The theme is alright. The track sounds alright but this is ur creation.
United States, New York, New York
Well, I've actually bumped your music before and it was hella dope and clean. This one here, levels are waaaay too low. I can't even hear what you spittin yo. Real Talk. Bring all these levels up, between 3-5 decibels, shoot it bacc at mes. I def. want ot be able to give a proper review. Until then, much LuV n' rEspECT #HipHop
United States, South Dakota, Rapid City