I feel like this song could use a bit more of a kick in the butt to bring it up a level. I like your lyrics and feel they have kind of a '90's metal thing going on. You have a nice guitar thing in the rhythm section but a I started off with, I feel it could use a bit more of a punch to it. Not necessarily faster, but put a bit more 'punch'. Good luck with your future songs and keep on writing!

Upon your very first listen to Caribou, Maine's (US) Rockin' Rob Wright and his fabulous "White Throne Judgment (My Ritual)", you cannot help but be impressed by the fine musicianship, inspired songcraft and the music's production values. While Rob Wright's musical inspirations are apparent, his sound is uniquely his own. Looking forward to hearing more from this exceptional artist!

I LIKE THE SPARESNESS OF THE SONG THE LOU REED TYPE VOCALS IN THE VERSE AND THE HAUNTING VIBE OF THE TRACK PULLS YOU INTO ITS THEMES NICE PRODUCTION VALUES ALTHOUGH MY PREFERENCE WOULD BE TO PULL THE VOCAL OUT A BIT MORE FROM THE MIX BUT GOOD EFFORT

I like the originality of your work. Strong message and creativity is a big plus. Good production, I can hear some good vocals to this, good job on the final mix-down. I can tell you have your heart and soul into what you do. Keep on pushing and never give up or get distracted in pursuing the dream of making it. I like the instrumental blend of sounds with some vocals and the production on the track is good. Keep up the great work! Peace!!!

Normally, as a guitarist mainly, I don't pay much attention to lyrics - which is why I don't write them, I let the other half of the band handle that. Your song really made me listen to the lyrics and get into the story. Great song!

One of the things I enjoy most about Number One Music artists is the newfound ability to hear music from around the world by singers who I'd never have the chance to listen to otherwise. That, in itself, is a great thing. Here, with this song I like the different types of guitars used. Vocally, haunting, yet a bit more echoy on the production than I think is necessary. It does add to the "live" feel added here. I'd actually expect to hear this song in a movie.

Interesting track. i like the chords. the production is not bad. the vocals could have been up another 3Dbs on the mix. maybe because his voice is low, it makes it lower in the mix. the harmonies are nice though. Song has a cool vibe though!

Grande cantante e anche bella canzone cantata con sentimento e passione è una soddisfazione ascoltarlo ben accompagnato da bravi musicisti e con un bel arrangiamento tutto perfetto in questa performance di tutti ma il vocalist è in grande e merita di essere conosciuto e sostenuto sono questi gli artisti che il pubblico dovrebbe seguire certamente non quelli che parlano

Listen brother, I've listened to your tracks again and again. YOUR VOCALS ARE TOO BURIED. PERIOD. I'm not quite sure if you are over processing them, or that fader just isn't quite up enough. I PROMISE you, as a producer, you have talent, however, if you can't get those vocals "un Buried", somehow, you're going no where. So, let me give you an example. Listen to any radio, of a major artist. YOU CAN CLEARLY HEAR AND UNDERSTAND THE LYRICS. This is your downfall, that is going to hold you back bro. You are a fine artist, just get the damn vocals out front and dominating. Trust me, I've beeen through this in earlier recordings I've done years ago. Now remix, and get your voice out there. People want to hear YOUR VOCALS. God Bless.

Great song really love this song great piece of art work delivered beautifully guitar sounds are amazing sing great backing vocals are great while I'm writing this and im listening to this a second time......I just love it,.......the lyrics are awesome tbe arraignment are awesome ......it's written and delivered beautifully ...the lead guitar sound as me myself a guitar player love tbe sound. I just started for the third time............love it love it love it ........tbe musicianship is great was played vreat ..................thank you for letting me review this song I truely love it......................