I like the style , but the beat wasn’t lined up properly , bars are solid tho. You got real talent so you can get better as you progress. Maybe try a different type of beat?. Looking forward to what you do next ????????

wow nice some rap/R&B/hip hop AWESOME .this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over.............................they the song was put together is very unique..........................just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the drums were played perfectly........................... i can't say enough about this song .........................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.......................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you....again.....................