probably too long intro; good verse and arrangement;i like players, the structure probably is not so commercial; the refrain not bad but you could improve the melody; i feel this song well done, and good luck

Drums are awesome, KUDOS! I feel the singer is trying to create this “Layne Staley” sound but it doesn’t work. I like the Iron Maiden lick, it makes the whole song great. Try to better mix the vocals into the whole song at times it’s too much in the front. I like the backing vocals. Overall a good song, but I like the last song from you guys better. All the best

Thanks for sharing!! nothing to say than i want more! Just we don't hear enough the voice on the chorus, but damn i like it!!!

have a couple cups of coffee and turn this tune up and it makes you want to jump around the room and kick the cat lol! Good luck and God Bless

Doesn't really have a hook. Sets itself for it but it goes back into verse, & B section. Incomplete.

Amazing rock tune with the ultimate 70s hard rock feeling. Very nice powerful vocals.

very interesting track would not listen to it on to higher volume setting but would listen to it again . good job

So the song is called "Shine" which seems like a contradiction to the feeling. This song is more on the dark side. The vocals are wierd. There not bad but the vocals kind of sound like a cat at times. The druming is great. It makes this song great, especially during the chorus and the fast ending. The part with all the crazy electro noises is dark so when it comes back it gives this song that pop, or hook, that compliments the the title. Nice Job