Marc Olivas / Songs / "Private Dance" Flash Yung Khris feat Darrein Saffron

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Yea I like this what’s up I can relate I’m feeling the vibe an the Creativity y’all put that work on that I call this Reality music this world wide music I also feel the beat I like how y’all ride the beat everybody can feel this one it’s for everybody an that’s is what so creative about it an that’s what Real music is about it’s for the people they must know that they are not alone in this World cause Great Minds Think A like!
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Catchy Chorus

Marc Olivas... This is a very catchy chorus you got going here. Of course it has that T-Pain vibe going. But the good thing I'll say about your song versus a T-Pain song is this. Your song has less auto-tune going. I'm not sure if you have any going in your song to tell the truth. I wish the rap versus were better. The first verse is ok. I don't know what happened in that second rap verse. It wasn't working at all. I'm curious as to why that even made the song because it completely destroyed my interest in whatever came next. But the song was decent up until then. That's why you don't have more stars. I would drop that second rap verse. Especially if you're actually trying to sell or shop this song. Do an all singing version of this song. The way the singing artist sounds on this track, you just might be sitting on a hit or a song you could possibly submit this song to T-Pain. It has potential but needs work. Keep pushin'.

Cool vibes

New wave music is good hook on point the rap and story line is good will you use autotune make sure death the auto-tune don't bleed into the music and when you rap on the second verse I know they were up off to now but I was kind of out but everything else was pretty straight keep doing what you doing I rise to the top making body drop and don't stop

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Nice work

New music up on page from Sick O Supa. New video to the song Party also, click the video link on the song. Thank you so much, we appreciate the great fan support and we ask that you spread the word and share our music and we will try our best to continue to give you the best music we have to offer, thank you again.

Good one

The song sound good i rate it five stars i think everything is perfect and the hook is dope those flows on the verses are perfect plus the beat is dope. The song is amazing with clear message
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