This is ok ....i would like to hear once mixed and mastered. Not feelin the chours, verse is ok ...he has alot feelin and i do like what he talking about. I think needs more work on punch lines and delivery. I dont hateon no one craft even its not for me it can difently be for someone else.i say keep going keep grinding and you c as nt do nothinng but get better

Good sound and quality vocals could use more reverb. I'm not a pro but I do have a ear for music this song is well put together and once the quality gets improved you will have a nice sounding classic

Diggin y he concept flow and production get tgat mixing and mastered done & maybe lil more adlibs in the background not a whole lot though & promote promote promote, enough said well done

Think u need to try recording like 4 bars at a time ...or work on not putting so many words into each bar .......................... Just my opinion tho

Not exactly my type of music, but once it gets started flows quite nicely. A bit too much repetition at the start, but words are clear and the production seems strong. Sounds quite professional and the piano sample is high quality, though maybe could do with adjust or adding at some point. Rough sudden endning, but overall a track of good quality.

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Keep up the hard work and continue doing what your doing..Good music is hard to comeby these daays but you seem to have it all figured out..thanks for sharing

The lyrics were decent but the delivery was off. I wasn't intending to have to write more but the thing is you have to develop you got to find some rhythm

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I want to be as honest as possible without taking anything away from this song. I can sense the energy and passion behind this song and you cannot fake that. That being said it would help to get a sound engineer, because it is not radio quality mixing. Additional some writing workshops might help understand yourself as a writer. Sometimes when ur rapping or recording and u sense you fall out of beat, it might be helpful to change certain words to make the lyrics fit more in the beat.

I like the concept. I hear the soul in the story. But I have to tell the truth, The sound of the vocals sound mediocre. You should take a little more time to practice your lyrics before you record them. There were some parts where I could hear you saying one thing but in your adlibs you said another. The beat is actually really nice. Im pretty sure the way you recorded this really doesn't do it justice. But like I said, just take more time to practice your delivery and you should be good. Keep grinding and moving forward.

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