Heaven's gateVery beautiful song thank you JC your song is very inspirational I enjoyed listening to it. Please continue to write and inspire others with your music. ???? lay me down is beautiful in its simplicity
Lay Me Down At Heaven's GateSoulful vocal with timeless tale of reconciliation and comfort for Jesus to take us home to Our Father. Slow tempo keeps us focused on the vision you are creating. I like the graduation in the guitar riff. This is not my favorite of your songs, however, it is a great message that many need to hear now. Come to the Refuge! Come meet Jesus and He will restore your Joy. Quantum Solace!
Unique sound.JC always bring a unique sound. On each song he brings another unique sound. , and thats whay even the song is basicely simple it atracts my ears. JC makes alote of repetitions in this song which emplify trhe subject: knock on heaven's door. you can feel the knocking in the music eventhough the music is very mellow and soft. I can feel the prayer out of a broken heart, because JC use a small voice in this song and this make you be excited about this beautiful nessage even more. I love it!
Heavens gateOkay, that strumming pattern needs changing apart from being the same monotonous, although nicely played strummed it doesn’t evoke any passion desire or emotional reactions. You need to concentrate on the listener, you’ve got an indisputable good enough lyric in there JC but you’re just not doing anything to promote it. Where’s the sunshine and the rest of the Sunshine Band. Your vocal is okay at least it has got some sort of tune retention and ability to keep in tune, albeit a not so confident tone and it’s a bit wavering. That said you could do with more help, you’ve obviously got a good facility to do recording so maybe get some back up vocal harmonies in there you could do that yourself but you probably should consider another lead vocalist and to then see if you can add some low amplified background harmonies and vocal compliments to that. Think about adding some percussion too. The song has some really interesting potential but it honestly sounds a bit incomplete.
Lay me down...I thought it started off a bit slow and really needed to up the tempo of the song. I hope this helps? Apart from the start being a little bit slow, it was quite a good song lyrically. In my opinion, I could listen to this song again. It was really easy listening
JC Lay Me DownNeeds a lot of work, the recording value is on the lighter side with a need for more effects. The vocals need some work. the song could be a good song, but this might take more work than you thought. Hang in there and keep working hard at it.
BlessedThank you for allowing me to listen to a great song I also Christian song my favorite Music is Christian rock gospel and gospel rap I love all types of music but my favorite music is blowing find Jesus Christ through gospel and Christian music continue to make green music continue to uplift our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ with your gift thank you for sharing your talents and gifts with the world and me may God continue to bless you in all your endeavors each and every time you make music I would love to hear it please keep me posted on any new music that you may have coming out or send me the info where I can download your music God bless your wonderful day to God be the glory
Up straight artists Mr hamarich AKA David Crawford say up to the flipping world my friend I like your music very nice song up straight to the next level good condition I am interested in your album to buy it on n1mGood morning my friend up straight artists Mr hamarich AKA David Crawford from Clarendon Jamaica artists from move up record i amazed hearing you chat some good music blessings my friend keep it rolling in and out make sure you are writing More good songs because I am interested in listening to More of your nice song I like your music very good condition up straight to the flipping world
about your songyes i think it is fantastic lyrics are fantastic music is also fantastic singing is also fantastic so all of it is fantastic Although i am in love with the percussion and i think putting it in this song will be fantastic but hay that is just me it is fantastic as it is there are also 3 people here hearing your song we all think it was fantastic well done so i gave it a top rating may GOD BE WITH you and family friends so on bless you in JESUS CHRIST name take care in him