This Will Work!!!Mrs. Jackie Jackie Jackie!!! This song right here... You got one!!! This melody on the hook (chorus) caught me, then kept me. I was dozing off prior to listening to your song. Then I said let me listen to one more song and it was yours, "I Am Who I Am". I'm still hearing it in my mind. Now as I listen to it, I'm guessing this is a reference vocal correct? Because I'm hearing some pitchy areas. They vocals can use a lil more feel to them as well. Meaning the way they are now sounds like it's not sung with feeling. The lead is sounding kind of like how you would sound if you're practicing and just running down the lines and the melody.. Like a " fire drill" as an analogy or practicing before a show. Again this is a great song. Don't think I'm being harsh here. I'm just being honest, "100" with you. And this is only my opinion. I like the song a lot! I wish I was able to Produce or Co-produce this one. I would love to be a part of this song. The "open space" after the first verse kind of puzzled me also. Not sure if it was something you had in mind there that wasn't recorded yet or something??? I would fix that. The music is ok. It works. But it needs to be mixed. Which takes me back to what I had mentioned earlier with saying "this has to be a reference recording". Because even your vocals need mixing. I'm thinking back now to the beginning of the song. Your vocals seemed really loud and lots of reverb. I have the feeling this is why you sang it this way. Like you are holding back some of your power and vocal ability so that it's not over powering the music. If you had turned the vocals down, you could push your vocals out more with feeling, emphasis etc. Maybe your headphones were too loud as well (if you were recording while wearing headphones). It may have been recorded using a portable recording machine maybe? Hmm, doesn't matter if it's a reference vocal to shop to labels, artists and publishing companies if you're trying to get the song picked up. I strongly encourage you to try that with this song. Not saying you can't re-record it yourself to make it work though. Just open up to some other options with this one instead of just "sitting on it". This song has me wanting to collaborate with you on some song writing to my music. I'd like to hear what you can do to my music. Very nice, catchy melody..."I Am Who I Was Am". Thumbs Up!
Never give upIts different it's like d old sade vide n that's a good thing. You should be super proud of yourself! If you are the written of the lyrics then I'm also saying you have a good pen game. Keep ya foot on d gas
Big fanJackie I have been a huge fan of your work and this song is lit ???? I like how it puts us the fans in your shoes, making us see your point of view and how storytelling it is. It's definitely written well hence I gave it 4 stars
Keep on reachingI really like the song.i can feel that you. Put your all into this song. Keep ondoing your thang. Can' t wait til you shoot a video for this song.i will be the first to congratulations you onthis.
Good!I like this especially the voice but it definitely needs a more stronger beat. It reminds me of Madonna in many aspects. Definitely like the tone of the artists voice! I like the songs rhythms and feel.
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Michael KazzNice and smooth has a jazz feel like to hear more instruments keep up the he good work can't wait to hear the next one some time a duet is a good idea live saxophone I pray you have a great year and safe year
very beautifulthe melody is beautiful and the vocals are very good. very emotional, very classic and very soft. one can hear that the performer relates to the lyrics and the message. A very nice song and very interesting.
TRACY G ALLEN FAT KID ON THE BLOCKJACKIE WHATS GOING ON IN THE UK,HAVE YOU EVER BEEN TO NASHVILLE TENN,OR WHERE YOU BEEN IN THE USA,IM BACK AS THE NUMBER ONE GANSTER RAP SONG IN ALL CONTRIES OUT THE U NITED STATES AND NUMBER OINE IN THE UNITED STATES FAT KID ON THE BLOCK
She sounds great.I like it. Its soothing. It is well put together. It sounds like she has a different language she singing in. She has a angelic feel to the flow of the song. I could see muself listening to this on the way to prison with ear phones
good songkeep goinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng.
nicethis heat right here ya voice is real nice and smooth we mos def need to work dm me when free but other then that this song is fire and on point do you have a video out if not you should drop one asap once more keep mashing salute I look to hear back from you salute
WowThis song is incredible I listen to it over and over again and I realize that you perfectly can combine sound with a hypnotizing Melody and it's like I'm stuck listening to you and that's one of the things that I like about artists if they can bring that out you're going to go great places with this type of music if you keep working great job great beat great concept great everything
Great workI love the beat an the whole vibe of the song... remain true to yourself. Keep working! Check out my new material.. nicely well put together vocals as well.... im wondering would you like to work together one day that will be dope
Dawan just loves this music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!“When you feel like you’re drowning in life, don’t worry – your Lifeguard walks on water.” A woman is the full circle. Within her is the power to create, nurture and transform.” — Diane Mariechild “We can do no great things, only small things with great love.” — Mother Teresa “If you’re feeling helpless, help someone.” — Aung San Suu Kyi “One’s life has value so long as one attributes value to the life of others, by means of love, friendship, indignation and compassion.” — Simone De Beauvoir “People will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.” — Maya Angelou “If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other.” — Mother Teresa “No one has ever become poor by giving.” — Anne Frank “People, even more than things, have to be restored, renewed, revived, reclaimed, and redeemed. Never throw out anyone.” — Audrey Hepburn keep your head up and keep bringing the hits...................DAWAN