More than the same 3 chords pleaseI love the sincerity but i cant handle the same chord progressions on the verse and chorus over and over. 6 minutes is 3 minutes longer than it should be. You have a nice vocal and even tho i cant understand the lyrics i can pick out a few words that comfirm this is a Christian tune.
Skeptical at firstI like the atibutes of your message, some can not fathom, what's it is looks, to come from living in shambles to a promised amercan, life, some thinkk Jesus is. God, which is, said it plainly says, my father Jehovah in which is greater than , Matthew 24 explains life now, now you see, how free America is .nice work .elwell done , got the system of the down vibe, great work, made me regardless if I like or not. The message I wanted to rock out.1tim 12 tell the near future of man and America. And man ruling over man, soon no more .greed selfish ask to kill to gain yo fool lie to blame shift, psalms 83:18 Jehovah God is the only true God. I only mentioned,do to blab on this review I heard Jesus, .and unjust had a false prophet, on Twitter, telling me Jesus is God, your song did Jesus.. Great song best vibe I rocked out my brother keep on keeping on James Lindsay
America, Land Of the Free - Dynamite DanielMonodeclamation and motor riff, this is how America, The Land Of Free begins. Melodic vocals, not one, but two, in chorus with backing vocals, interesting. Guitar solo in the middle of a song. The slow tempo changes to medium with the lead guitar. Strong rebirth in the song. Then comes back again and from the beginning - a slow motor riff with added delicate flavors that could not be heard before. At the end you can hear the vocals. American Dream. Greetings, Maciej ATRAPA
VERY POWERFUL SONG.The same melody can be interpreted softly, melodiously, joyfully, raw, playful, and in many ways sung or played by an instrument. Think of a metal song, a children's song or a romantic song. Of course, this is not a purely compositional aspect, but we must take it into account as it influences notoriously. Thinking about how the melody should sound, even the timbre of it is a very important aspect. Very good song. My congratulations.
Nice!The music is nice, and I like it. I think it does have that down to earth vibe to it. I like this one a lot, and you're on your way to getting an award somewhere . Keep producing beat work like this, and keep your touch on it. This is unique and original. I think this is a hit for sure. Nice one! By the music you can tell that you are passionate about your work as every artist should be. Never give up and dreams and bigger things will follow! PEACE!
Clear conviction!True conviction may sound like an odd compliment but it is what I see clearly in your music and lyrics. Rock is a great medium for your message. Music is the universal communicator. Keep driving at it. I want to hear more.
BewertungBei dem track muss sich die aufnahme ein wenig klarer anhören, es rauscht zu sehr. Und der Gesang muss ein wenig weicher klingen, der beat ein bisschen leiser bei der Aufnahme so das der Gesang deutlicher klingt. Bei der Stimme ist zu viel Hall drin so das es sich anhört als würde man in einer Dose hören, es würde mich freuen wenn sie es mit meinen Tipps probieren und es so neu aufnehmen. Es hört sich dann hundert Prozent besser an, Ich helfe gerne wo ich kann
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Critique. Influences. Lyrics. Music. Fluidity, etc.First, you remind me somewhat of, 'Weird Al Yankovic'. along with maybe, 'NOFX'.The music lacks bass. Which is important when recording thru a DAW program! I would classify your genre as Indie Alt. Rock, with a little Ska and Punk? Maybe. Anyway, not bad. A little more experience and you should come more into your own... I would much like to know your influences just to see how much I was off with my opinion. Let me know what you think about my music as well when you get a chance. Thank you.
DopeAye beat is dope asf and great mixing done on track , so shout out to whoever your engineer was and keep doing your thang keep grinding keep putting in that hard work and stay consistent Keep doing your thang keep grinding non stop you definitely have potential and the talent is there continue to make that real music you doing and you gone make it fam that’s my opinion keep workin Follow my Instagram and twitter @king_james_on1
yesI perceived from the beginning of the track a sense of freedom and power without brakes as if someone used me to abandon my inhibitory brakes and give vent to my emotions, the musical tour of the guitar is very full, it drags you to listening and makes also for the drums and also supports the solo guitar until the rhythm increases incessantly until reaching the maximum ecstasy.
THE FIRST CHOICEIT'S YOUR MOVE PRODUCTIONS SUBMIT'S I NEED SOMEONE TO HELP ME ACHIEVE MY GOAL OF PLAYING ON STAGE SINGING TO THE LARGER AUDIENCES..I JUST WILL NOT HAVE THE FINANCES UNLESS YOU HELP ME OUT...
America ????Yep time to change,get back to basics,get back to democracy can’t really hear the words,interesting guitar and melody,nice driving beat,kinda goes on and on it’s long too waiting for some kind of a change but just a not very good lead ,changed happened banging heads now,yeah good beat,and lead is still wanting,need to practice guitar licks but something anything about Jesus is always good.wish I could hear the words
Back to the 80ths heavy metalA distorted guitar clear and vintage sound, just enough powerfull, but efficient. I feel the whole song his only supported by this (efficient, again) guitar and the drums. The voices sound "limit" to me: I mean they sound a quite shy compared to the agressive tune of the drum rythm and guitars (lack of power by this side). Furthermore, the seond voice souds a little bit out of the harmony at the end the phrase, something sounds weird overhere. I like the rythm breakdown passing from the speed sequence to the main one at about 4'. The end reminds me a big piece of RATM (with a lot of less rage). All this is my personal feeling, I just try to provide the more neutral feedback as possible.
You're my favorite On N1MNo surprise!! I do really love your music! I ear you and I keep the sound of DD immediately! Guitars have always the same good instrumentation and riff, the voice as typicaly from the deepth of the earth! You're the best of this Platform!!!