The intro is fine but way too long, cut it in half. Also try starting the second verse with the intro of the song. I like the way the vocal line matches the guitar for the first verse. You should repeat that pattern for the second verse to be consistent.
United States, California, Lake Forest
Nice!! I like the style lyrical content is quite interesting..instrumentation is also nice I believe a remix for balancing and clarity might transform this baby into a jewel! keep up the good work
Canada, Quebec, Montreal
Horrible guitar sound….again TOO MUCH COMPRESSION! Very elementary guitar playing. The overall band has a novice sound. Sounds like a group of guys who have the recording gear but not the talent
United States, Nevada, Las Vegas
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United States, Texas, SPRING
livin in your own hell
i repeat >>> the instrumental on this song has an excellent feel. the chord selection for this song carries the entire track. the overdrive is a lil harsh with powerful strokes. the blending of voices the the electric fusion causes a combination that seems slightly awkward and this is the element i enjoyed. good job. the acoustic guitar rifts at the intro took the song to the next level.
Livin in your own hell
Nice song...the riff is a little repetitive but the melody is familiar.....a polished version of the song would make this a really good song.
United States, Virginia, Blacksburg
livin in your own hell
the instrumental on this song has an excellent feel. the chord selection for this song carries the entire track. the overdrive is a lil harsh with powerful strokes. the blending of voices the the electric fusion causes a combination that seems slightly awkward and this is the element i enjoyed. good job
i appreciated the intro again great song
United States, California, Los Angeles
When I hear this, I hear the potential of the song writer. The tune needs production, and polishing. I think the tune has potential but performance and production will make this something viable.
United States, North Carolina, Kannapolis
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United States, New York, New York
the intro was good for me to tune my guitar to- thanks! some verb on vox would make it bigger and a doubling on vox during chorus
Very nice 5star
United States, New Jersey, Plainfield
Review of living in your own hell
Great song liked the flow of the song and well mixed and recorded great work.
United Kingdom, Dudley