Clear MessageThe message to me is clear the variety in the actually music is what is lacking for me most. If I was to hear this song at a concert I would assume that this was one of the first songs you had done. For a message so strong it needs more power behind it the pitchy notes and the basic chordal structure take away from it. Take some time to remix add more vocals, samples, and personality to it and I believe this will be a homerun hit.
REMIXI THINK THAT IF YOU DO A REMIX THAN YOUR SONG WILL BE MUCH BETTER. AS A PRODUCER,SINGER,SONGWRITER MY SELF. I WOULD ADD KEY BOARDS, MORE BACKGROUND VOCALS. AND SLOW DOWN AT THE BRIGE. I THINK I NO WHERE YOU WANT TO GO. TRY A REMIX.
waging warLove the feel and lyrics and how its rock and christian. Its true and gives people the word of god. Continue to rock anf preach.
Waging WarI wish I could see the lyrics of this song -- I'm not sure lyrically what the point is that you are trying to make. The guitar and instrumental tracks are strong. The vocal is a little pitchy for me -- but most importantly I'm not sure what the message is in this song.