What we hear is a two chord pattern out of one of these rhythm machines I cannot precisely name. My own experience with stuff like this is limited to a simple drum computer. Anyway, above this two chord pattern, a lead voice tells us something meaningful, rather narrative than really sung. In some moments I can hear something like a chorus, a hookline, but as it is not really a melody, it vanishes right away in my head. Besides this, there is nothing interesting in here. The pattern rolls along with hardly any variation or change, and so does the voice. I guess this one's not adressed to rock music fans but rather to the recipients of the message. That's of course basically ok. Everyone's got the right to speak up, and if this is the medium of choice for you, I won't criticise it. But still it's got not much to do with rock music for me.

voce giusta e tonante con un ritmo trascinante pero' piu' paelato che cantato ma ogni tanyo si canta anche e il ritmo aumenta di grado e potenza molto ballabile e anche ascoltabile k'arrangiamento e' preciso per questa canzone che puo' durare all'infinito perche' e' molto ballabile per gli amanti del ritmo va nene ma se si cercano note vere allora ti accorgi che non e' il tuo hebere

This really starts out with a big beat, which I've always been a fan of. You have an interesting style going on here with the minimalistic backing track and a sort of preaching vocal to relay your message. The production is simple, since there isn't much to mix. Clear and straight forward. I may suggest compressing your vocals a bit to get them a little more out front of the track. All in all, not a bad effort. Good luck with all the rest of your endeavors. Keep writing!

FIRST OFF I LIKE THE SPACE THATS IN THIS TRACK IT HAS A KIND OF DANCE BEAT WITH TALK SING VOCALS REMINISCENT OF MARK KNOPFLER BOB DYLAN THAT TYPE OF VIBE WOULD BENEFIT FROM A BRIDGE OR CHANGE SOMEWHERE TO ADD SOME NEEDED LIGHT AND SHADE OTHERWISE A GREAT EFFORT WORTH CHECKING OUT

Great song really love this song great piece of art work delivered beautifully guitar sounds are amazing sing great backing vocals are great while I'm writing this and im listening to this a second time......I just love it,.......the lyrics are awesome tbe arraignment are awesome ......it's written and delivered beautifully ...the lead guitar sound as me myself a guitar player love tbe sound. I just started for the third time............love it love it love it ........tbe musicianship is great was played vreat ..................thank you for letting me review this song I truely love it......................

One of the things I enjoy most about Number One Music artists is the newfound ability to hear music from around the world by singers who I'd never have the chance to listen to otherwise. That, in itself, is a great thing. Here, with this song the fast paced dance beat is an interesting choice for the country styled vocals of Don. I appreciate the effort that went into making this song.