DBoySWAG / Songs / Broken Promises (ft. KBStackzz)

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Don't be afraid to use some metaphors and describing verses. I loved the whole song too, there was just questions I had after the song was over. You seem to be the type to have ideal flow in your content, that's great. Though, people have to know easily catch on and that's the purpose of the artistry. I don't have any concerns, only my opinions. I would say to keep that flow going and create some word tension in certain parts of the song, where people can be able to pick their favorite verse. I strongly believe you can make it to the top, it might take some time, but I really attained the true vibe of music when hearing this song. Plus I could relate to the topic of this, which seems to be a vital source to drawing the audience to you and reaching the spot your heart desires in the rap career. Never stop making music though, you have what it takes. you have so much potential and I would definitely one of your future albums and share it with people I know.
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DOPE

DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE dope DOPE DOPE DOPE dope DOPE dope DOPE DOPE dope dope DOPE DOPE dope DOPE dope DOPE DOPE dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope great Great work, dope sound, Keep working no matter what's going on you might become a greatest artist ever. Making music is not easy but if you have faith and hope that you gonna do it, you will do it. Talent like yours need be heard by the world so keep working, Keep walking, your dreams will come true. I wanna see you on billboard some day and on tv. DON'T EVER STOP DOING MUSIC Bless up Hope. Keep up the good hard work remember hard work pays off I do like your style the hook is good the music is just right for the mood of this song I would love to hear more of your music so keep posting. Keep up the good hard work remember hard work pays off I do like your style the hook is good the music is just right for the mood of this song I would love to hear more of your music so keep posting. Keep up the good hard work remember hard work pays off I do like your style the hook is good the music is just right for the mood of this song I would love to hear more of your music so keep posting

Nice work

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Hard2thecore

Like the beat good sound this video would be nice with a visual to add to the sound versatile track I can imagine it on the radio station keep brining the same energy to your art bless up.
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