Sounds ill! Your flow is great, and I dig you writing abilities. The beat is tight, not to over the top and fits well. Nice work CJP... Respect! Keep up the great work!

I definitely feel the lyrics to this song. Sounds poetic like Pac. But, I think that the hook could be a lot better. It has potential so I won't knock you. To me, it sounds like a 1990s rap song. If you change the melody, the hook and the style to fit the lyrics it would sound cool. But right now, I hear NWA and unless you are trying to create a movement with the upcoming movie releasing this summer, I can not understand how this song fits in today's rap or hiphop culture. Sorry to be so blunt, but I am being 100. Its just my opinion though.

Enjoy this artist work.I find his work to be intriguing,painting vivid scenes with his lyrics.This jam is solid,always enjoyed his rap and vocalizing.I believe him to be an artist that's up and coming,bijan.

I think you did very well on the track. It's not every day we get a different taste of music. You seem to have the flow over the beat down very well keep up the great work. Anxious to hear what you put out next.

Thanks for sharing your track with me& looking forward toward some feedback positive or negative. The instrumental is very chilling & story telling'ish.  This track's lyrics & flow put with the beat make it cool to chill & relax.  Keep up the hard work and drive. Good luck with your future in hip-hop music.

I like this song a lot. It has a real message in it. Something that is missing in music these days. I do think you can learn to control your breathing better or layer the track where you aren't saying the hook and verse on the same breath. Other than that, i like it

Dope song homie!........................................................................................................................................................................

I like where you are going with this! something that is different then whats on the radio! good cadence nice lyrics and a smooth melody! keep up the good work ! i hope to hear more from you ! btw make sure you are not over doing the reverb cause i can hear the airyness! but besides that it was enjoyable ! untill next time its ya fav dj -Dj LG

My boy just my thought I like the song and I get the message just my opinion I would tone it down some and put that spit and flow mixed with some swag and I would also so fix the hook your boy is a hook master I told you to hit me up I'll make that song a hit record it has the potential to get so airplay so here's my info hit your boy peace. CaNy Entertainment

You remind me a lot of kid cud not to take away from your originality but i think if you listened to him he would help you go forward. Very strong lyrics with a lot of meaning not many new kats do that so much love for that. Maybe a little more emphasis on your words, spit it from the heart and they can't hold you back. Best of luck brother

On tha real your voice funny but I feel this track my gee...maybe cause it's real life...I been felt like im on tha edge of tha cliff but keep it up you never know what's next

blessed love da one ya energy strong feelings deep lyrics impacting officially a fan the only thing i would work on is put a little more effect on the voice in the hook and mix down and its a hit factor sell off keep working haadd

Love the way your vocals sound. Very powerful delivery. The beat is straight hiphop and it really hits. I like the hook, but I think it could have sounded better if you would have got someone with a lighter voice just to give it more dynamic sound. Again I have to say the beat is super sick. Very melodic and crisp. I like the bridge you through on the last verse also. Keep doing your thing man. You are definitely on your way.

i guess that it is safe to say that georgia has found its next up and coming star in the rap /hiphop game and his name is cjp and he fresh outta stone mountain the track is dope the flow is on point lyrics are definitely one of a kind i was feeling the track from the very beginning its not a lot of artist that can capture the listener with the lyrics but he does and i salute you for that gift...

I want to start off by saying it took some time for the instrumental track to grow on me.but right from the beginning when you started rhyming you sucked me in and made me want to listen to the song so that is a good thing. Your style is in a game all on its on ,so good job on being different. The chorus is one that I would have to listen to a couple times but its still catchy on its on.pretty good track man keep up the good work.

Indeed my brother this track has definition and substance. I am feeling the melody and the barz are surprisingly not Trap-style coming from a southern artist. Dope work keep banging!

CJP has a natural flow. The music and overall song was good. However the hook was sang under the key, so it sounded a little flat. Redo the hook or have someone sing it. Once this happens everything will fall right into place.

Yo... "CJP" whats good Bruh. "ON THE EDGE" is the first music of the Day I've listened to & I feeling what you put together Lyrically/Concept wise. The Beat is pretty good (vibe wise). Today I've fresh ears and I have to say that SONICALLY, your music needs a little more attention to it (Mix/Mastering) to truly bring out the potential you have in your songs. The Sonic's of a song can determine or allow some one to say "yo.. I phuck with this song right here, Mane I can't wait to hear it my Car/Truck", but then it's played back in a vehicle and all the feeling is gone or just sounds different. So critique wise, I'll just say mixing & mastering is all this song is truly missing Bro. Your performance is good to go, the beat is good to go. Keep doing whatcha doing Mane & feel free to contact me @anytime.... wudgrain.musik@gmail.com or wuddro.musik@gmail.com I'm always in ATL working. By trade I'm a audio Engineer/Producer so let me know if you'd consider a different Sound Shape. Stay 100 Pimp

First of all it has a nice beat and lyrics .. Lyrics are on beat and relevant. The rap is good but the singing needs improvement. It has a nice flow but can be a lot better

What up CJO,ya track is off the hook fam. Would like to collaborate with you in the near future. Would like to also know when is the full album coming out. Will