first off good job my friend very nice ...i love the beat and the fact that you had the right energy made me listen to it twice your lyrics where there the punchline and metaphore's where on point it was one of those songs you dont even have to be a hip hop person to wanna stick around and listen to the production was on point the mixing was nice keep me post G #salute you did your thang fo real cuzz , but overalll based on beat/lyrics/energy & production str8 10/10 cuzz you put it down proper for that beat send some more of your stuff man i am a fan for sure it was different and unique is all i have to say shit went hard turnt it up bounced it back twice to make sure i caught all the lyrics you was on point .....stay in touch G you aint like most cali rappers but am still loving it S/O cali i love all the music you guys be puttin out only that real shit #respect

Sounds like some Kanye, nice beat. Are tose samples or did you play all the parts on this? really came together nicely. Rap flow is very tight, I like the way the delivery is on the vox.

All I am gonna say is you have my upmost respect. Your vision, lyrics, and motivation is really on point. I believe you got what it takes to make it. #YAHH

Very tight song I can dig it keep it up man keep pushing the sky is the limit big homie I like everything about the song you got a different style man .

The instrumental seems very well armed, very hard, yet fluid, the fluid flows in you instrumental, I really like the chorus a very good intervention and a solid voice message in verses seem fabulous hope I can hear more over the artist in the near future, production and arrangements are totally great. sorry for my english El instrumental me parece muy bien armado, muy duro y a la vez fluido, la vos corre fluida con el instrumental, me agrada mucho la parte del coro una muy buena intervención y una solida voz, el mensaje en los versos me parece fabuloso espero pueda escuchar mas de el artista en un futuro cercano, la producción y los arreglos son totalmente geniales.

The instrumental has a real poppy sound but i like how your voice sounds and you've got some bars. The only part I didn't like to much was the bridge/breakdown 2 minutes into the song.

I can tell from the top that you have a good story to tell. I admire good story tellers. I dig the vibe. This is ready for the world to hear. Got me bouncing in the ATL. Please continue to give us your sound.

Bro overall I gave you a 4. everything sounds good the only reason I didn't give you a 5 is cause the vocals need to be just a tad bit louder. as far as your bars and verse set up it was perfect. If you ever wanna feature on a track email me. Bkaylah6@gmail.com We defiantly gotta hop on a track together. wish you the best of luck hommie

Aye what's good it's Zach jones A.K.A MySTA NAM, I vibed out to this song in my studio. It has a good amount of potential so keep it going. Dreams fade, Realities are made.

Really like the beat and the words are good too the story of the song is great can't be mad at a good story on a great beat keep grinding g I see you

I must say that the flow is on track the technic is also on point. The mixing of the song is wanting i think some more work could be put in into it. Over all i think its a good jam and i encourage that you continue doing your thing. They say rome wasn't build in one day so keep building music and let the word experience you brilliance. All the best

What your doing is amazing brother.. keep it up and I assure you, you will find true peace and happiness in your journey to be an MC. I myself am a MC and I am touched by this song! Move Forward!

you told your life story in this track. i almost feel like i know you after listening to this. good shit, bro. And I'm especially happy that you're from Cali, cuz i was born in San diego. The West ain't never dead.

Nice track! keep up the good work, your on your way b

very nice lyrics .very original. definatly ggonna have to check out your page please check me out on www.reverbnation.com/southpaul thank you

I like your style its hot for real wordplay is sick. The hook crazy for real you need a deal. I like the song its hot homie continue to grind bruh! The mix and master is on point.

Yo, I listned to I am The I Am...I dig the sound man, you have something real to talk about and it's refreshing..Keep up the good work that you are contributing to the music community!!!