I actually like this song, it is very well structured and definitely showcases your faith as well as lyrical talent. the rhyme scheme is a little outdated for my taste, but that fact is just relative to the fact that it sounds like this MC put time and thought into his music. While it does sound like a sermon in a rap song, I do feel that it has potential to go places, and the most important part is that this has a message, whether in the hook or the song as a whole. Definitely replay material, if this is your genre (Rap[Christian or not]) -ManII

I think this track has a nice flow with a great meaning! The words are clear and the production is solid! I'm digging the the live music feel! Good wrk

I like that old school flow. Positive lyrics. To really grab attention tho you're gonna need a more hyped beat. Like Lecrae's beats. And I like how you have God as your main theme linked to your future, it would be great if you could incorporate some real life events and tie them to religion.

First id like to say that I love the beat. Its a real classic hiphop beat. The flow was very nice and I could hear everything said very clearly. Im not to big on the concept of the song. But I don't take anything away from it just for that. What you rap about is totally your thing. Just not really into the god subject on music. But back on a positive not you did your thing. I can hear the passion in your work and that always a great thing. keep up the great work and look forward to hearing more from you.

I feel you on your mission on this one. I believe others will bump to this. People have lacked faith recently so your words should bring some of the people back together who are into that. All you on the lyrics? Did you write them and your flow is nice. Reach for a party joint like this.

A strong message that is reinforced with the chorus. I like the passion you have it comes across. You have a good voice control so everything is nice and clear. I think this track is a credit to you. It is not my preference in hiphop as I am non religous but you go fam. My opinion from a hiphop point view is your lyrics are bit too predictable places which may work against and the chorus needs some more attention. Keep that fire burning fam , Kewba The Music Man

strong intro. great message of course which will reach all kinds of people. hook deserves a little more substance or just go deeper and add more. hook just to basic. flow is predictable and by the end of the second verse your kinda already turned off. maybe some breaks in the beats so you can emphasize your punchlines but great background music for a family bbq, which aint bad

Thanks for sharing your track with me and looking forward toward some feedback positive or negative. I am glad to hear this track that is coming out of  Philly near my suburb of Levittown.  I appreciate the style of music you are coming out with.  This track is great & not talking about the the same stuff being pushed into the society today and influential to our youth each year. Keep up the good hard work and drive.  Good luck with your future in hip-hop music.

Very nice I like it. It's good that you are happy and comfortable where you are in your spiritual life and journey it really shows in the music. Keep it up great job

This track is a attention getter , the music commands your ear to listen.Coupled to a positive message makes me personally glad to listen.Looking forward to hearing more the artist"Beridox". Be successful, Be Blessed…"7fourG"

Hello B.E.R.I.D.O.X. O would like to start out by saying love the instrumental..Takes you back to a 90s type of feel. To be honest with you your style and flow takes me back to early cross movement music which is not a bad thing. Cross Movement is the group that actually got me into listening to Gospel Rap/Christian Hip Hop. So keep doing your thing for The Father bro. Be Blessed