The words are weird, but the melodies are interesting as far as the instruments are concerned. I could not follow all the story even though I tried. The balance is good and the editing was well-done.

Nice 1 keep it up ,send me more of your songs direct follow me on twitter @katapilaa and add me on facebook: katapila streetleague

has potential its not really what you say but how you say it! a little more energy lyrically and more bounce to the beat and you may have a winner. continue grinding workin on your craft and living your dream!

Song beat is great your vocals need to be raised. I like the chorus and the overall song production. I feel that it can be tighten in certain areas.

Listen i been in the music game for a min im not here to knock your game nor criticize im here to let you know what you need to do to make your game 10 times tighter alright. 1. loose the re-verb behind the voices (people want to no only hear what you are saying but the music as well. 2.work on your lyrics get more definitive (meaning give them something to vybe to make sure all your lyrics tell a story or have a lot of punch lines) beat is hard doe bruh keep doing yo thang its all about perfecting what you have . much love bruh check out my stuff on reverbnation A.MAWREECE SOUNDCLOUD.COM/AMAWREECE