Dear subscribers. My song North and South has a very good review I love to share with you. What do you think? Agree with the review? What is your favorite song of mine?
I keep working on my new songs. Hope to show you soon some more. For now one tune already... link This will be for Carousel. Which will be the name of the Album. I do not know if it will the biggest song, like North and South. But I like Carousel. Shadows the movie I am making, will have songs of Carousel too in it.
The lyrics will be somewhat like: It's a piece, you and me, you watching over me.
vs1. Dripping, the rain falling inside of me You're every part of my wall, and you bent it all for me Iron melts
vs2. We're growing circular like a carousel drippin' inside on my heartbeat
your heart outside a second heart beating as mine living, alive riding my life
a carousel that never parts driving inside it's a ride propelling, my life
my beautiful carousel every piece of my heart in our carousel like the rain falling every drop into a piece of our carousel every drop changing into a piece of our carousel, carousel, carousel
my every dream of you my every dream my every dream of you dripping...
dripping inside on my heartbeat I knew I had a heart outside a second heart that beat like mine living a life
and around again...
God made a piece for your carousel going around, to be homebound every morning, dawn, you know you found the missing piece of your carousel, homebound and when you're down you can wound up your carousel
I will go round in between all the pieces in your carousel smiling, loving, you, and your sound, on your heartbeat every part of our carousel
our carousels seemly dreaming together beating finding the same speed, and like the rain failing inside of us our every part of, our walls into one carousel, carousel
my desire, your desire in one carousel
So, for now, my review of North and South.... you can read below...
L;ove you all! Love you so much! Thank you for reading my email.
Song: North and south
Overall Impression: Jiska Hachmer has a sweet natural voice, accompanied by light instrumentals, North and South is a delightful song. The lyrics are clever, and delivered in a manner that shows off Jiska's vocal range and virtuosic talents; she has a command of her voice that demonstrates that she can sing with power, and also so vulnerably that it is almost fragile, but never breaks, and everywhere in between. The form of the song is very nice as well, with a clear musical and character development, and opening and closing with similar words, but a new meaning.
Strongest Point(s): The songwriting skills exhibited by both Josh Woodward and Jiska Hachmer are individually splendid, but together result in a terrific collaboration. The instrumentals fit the tone of the song magnificently, and support the melody with tasteful harmony. The vocals are masterful, and offer a wide range of skill; in tone, tune, articulation, and dynamics. Lyrically, the song paints a vivid image of character development, and are reinforced by matched energy and feel in the song. As I said earlier, the form of the song terrific; it is clear and well thought out, reinforcing not only the words in the title, but their changing meaning (as I perceived).
Area(s) of Improvement: The recording quality in the vocal mic isn't the greatest, but I feel with a higher quality mic you'll have more of an opportunity to clearly exhibit your voice.
Target Audience Appeal: Fans of soft rock, folk, acoustic rock, pop, pop rock, today's hits will enjoy this song. This has a wide array of potential on screen (in film, indie films, tv, streaming services like Hulu and Netflix, and ads) along with mainstream radio. This song has the potential to make big waves, the more exposure you give it, the more likely it is it and you as an artist are to be picked up.
Artist target suggestions: Your voice is unique and I believe have an excellent future with your music. Although influences are important, your voice is the most important in shaping your future. Jiska Hachmer, Jewel, Ariana Grande, Celso Pina, Christina Aguilera, Compay Segundo, Dua Lipa, Duncan Dhu, Ed Sheeran, Grupo Canaveral, James Arthur, John Mayer, José Feliciano, Justin Bieber, Kevin Gates, Little Mix, Los Acosta, Los Mirlos, Los Ángeles Azules, Lukas Graham, Madonna, Miley Cyrus, One Direction, Paula Abdul, Selena Gomez, Taylor Swift, Virus (Latin), Zara Larsson
About the Reviewer: Rob Lawson is a Master’s Music Performance major at Indiana University of Pennsylvania. He is a percussionist, composer, conductor, and recording artist. He has performed with the Wind Ensemble, Symphony Orchestra, Percussion Ensemble, Brass Ensemble, Horn Choir, Pit Orchestra, and Keystone Winds. He has composed, arranged, and premiered works for Percussion Ensemble, Pep Band, and Brass Quintet at IUP, and conducted the Pep Band, Symphony Band, Percussion Ensemble, Brass Ensemble, and Chamber Ensembles, along with various recitals. Rob graduated from Baldwin Wallace Conservatory of Music, where he earned a Bachelor’s of Music in Performance, was the Principal Percussionist and Timpanist of the Wind Ensemble, Percussionist and Drummer with the Beatles Band, and conducted the Wind Ensemble, Symphonic Band, Symphony Orchestra, New Music Orchestra, and various Chamber Ensembles. Rob also has experience with the recording process, both in front and behind the mic, from solo pieces to rock bands to full orchestral ensembles. He also teaches private lessons in percussion, conducting, music theory, and has taught high school marching percussion.
I love you all! Almost 2000 subscribers that is a lot of people that will read this email. And it means a lot to me. I never forget the day I was in my old home, in the middle of a change with a new homeowner, after 7 calm good years in that home, a new person took over that home and started to exploit me and my kids, so we moved. And the kids already had it very tough with abusive teachers in the schools, so they had transferred some times already. Also, one teacher and her husband were murdered. The region was not that calm sweet region like 7 years before. All had changed. One person asked me to come back at n1m. I am so grateful for her to have asked me back. So, I uploaded 3 songs, instead of one. If I remember well I had one uploaded, she asked me back online on n1m and I uploaded 2 more songs. That new year I had a few messages and listeners already.
Me in the middle of that bad story locally. Transferring in another bad local story in my new town, in the Netherlands. And my kids soon got trafficked, away from me, stolen from me by the locals. Because I had asked an adjustment, all lawful arranged by the right companies and local attendance officer from Amsterdam, that had told us what to do. And she arranged all because they have a website for anyone, and my local attendance officer did not respond. So, I kept telling the local one all these laws and things we had to do, the way the government told me and the other attendance officer, and they all said school law is finished for your kids, they have EQF 5 diploma's and must continue EQF 6 even, that's a BSc. They did online. As they recovered from trauma after abuse by the new homeowner in that town and those teachers that had abused. But the locals are very criminal and frauded. So, I tried to press charges at a police office. And there more fraud happened, as something was put in the dutch system about us, to stop us from pressing charges against these locals, but the gov companies had told us to that. So, they showed a network of people working against the law, and we accidentally fall victim of their crimes. This story only continued into more bad things, me missing my kids, and my kids miss me. And all this success on n1m. Thank you so much! Because that helps us through a lot!
Also, I continue my studies. That's another story the locals did wrong in the previous town for some years, but these locals did arrange that. That is now fine again, after a strive in the other region from 2012 - 2020.
So, I have been from lawsuit to lawsuit and abuse through abuse. And still, miss my kids.
Then in the middle of my BSc. health science studies, covid19 starts. And I got an interview recently on my work since the outbreak on covid19. Also, new interviews can come up, because our school has media wanting to interview us, students.
See here what I do with my studies. I am a singer, and study, and have my company Essence. link
Soon the interview is online, and then I can show you that interview too,and perhaps the other ones if those come.
Through all this, I keep working on a new CD, and my movie shadows. The music will be for that movie too. My followers grow again on youtube, so finally I will go to the studio this summer, i hope.
I am invited a few times now for youtube studio Paris. I might go there too soon, for meetings. But next summer I will be recording some new songs, I hope. Last summer was the plan, and I have traveled a lot, but youtube found too many inactive followers and deleted them, so I had not enough followers anymore to go to the studio. It was delayed by that.
I am more ready though now, so, I cant wait to go and see what that will be like. I do want to tour too.
I might do APA things this year, or next year too. So, I do want to combine my USA visit for APA with a tour as well.
I just cant wait to see what you all think of this and would love to hear me sing on a tour. Please let me know.
I will sing some new songs, some from this list, and lots better than you hear here... As my equipment is not that good, at home.
And some covers I think, if you like.
I am working hard on the pressing charges and getting all help to get my kids back. I have had some ups and downs with the lawyers on this. But I had that also from 2012 -2020 with those other locals, not letting me to a plan the gov company that had created that said I had to follow,, they wanted to exploit as well and just put me in a job, despite my disability, pelvic disability and therefore I had a study plan, to get a new fitting job. They refused I strived years, and the old plan is now put back as the plan to follow, so I do that, I study again. To be an md/psychologist. And I know how the last good lawyer took me years to get him. My good rent lawyer was also a very good one, was also one I had to look for, for a while. So, I think it is the same with this case with my kids, I know I followed the laws, and the locals refused and are thus criminals, but the gov had said me what to do, I had followed that, and they also work on getting these locals, but it just takes a while to find the right lawyer. To, get that done right, same as the other very long case, of years and years, and then no one able to solve, until this last one. And he worked 2 years on it as well.
So, touring would make me happy. And I know soon, my kids are older than 16 and 18 and, one day, they get their own lives back. And that's very soon, they are 13 and 15. I just can only keep working on that, and get them back one day. It is what they want, and the children's law demands to listen to their will and help them achieve that. So, the moment the good lawyer comes, they are back, as the law actually demands all that. And they continue their BSc. then, which is only 9 months left, its a top-up. They are almost done. And degreed they will continue their master and link. next 4 years after that. So, the moment they are home, they study and they want to travel and have their Instagram and social media and their friends online, and their them in real life traveling to them. So, a very good life is gonna come in some years.
It would be only good for them if that's soon. So, they can have the better life instead of this horrible life with these locals, that denied their rights and abuse them. Good, I am studied well on those topics, so they will recover and will be fine over time.
We will move away from the Netherlands in any way, as this is a horrific country. But all the days after will be good days. Them then grown, and finally doing all their rights. They are lucky to have already done lots of studies and are good at studying, so theyĺl be fine in any way, with good jobs. And I am always their home where they can study and grow, we never fight. So, we have it easy together, honestly, I think that is what the locals ticked of, as they are criminal, abusive and want all people to be abusive. They believe in being mean to kids and abuse them constantly. They knew my work is catching those types of criminals, I worked since 2013 on this. They were coming from a group of abusers, abusing their work and power and trafficked my kids. That made it easier to recognize what types of crimes this is they do, all dutch gov companies themselves warned me to for their crimes and fraud and to press charges etc.
So, I cant wait to see what the future brings. Now I keep studying and working and create more music and cant wait for this next summer, and to finally show you some work.
lots of love from me L;ove!
Thank you very very very much for all your love and support.
Almost 1700 Subscribers. I love you all! Thank you for subscribing. 20 songs of mine are now played 100.000 times. Thank you so much! 5.2 million profile views, and 4.2 million plays in about a year, actually. I never expected this, so, that makes me happy! I can' t wait for the next things I make to be finished and published.
On twitter, I have now 500.000 views per month, as well. So, I think next year will be a good year. Able to finally go to the youtube studio's, and publishing new songs, and with better quality, and to publish an album with all my own songs. And one with some covers. And one with my new songs.
I also hope my kids are home soon, and that we have changed the faults in this government.
I wish you all a very merry Christmas. (I almost wrote on my sons gf's Christmas present that I will send her, marry Christmas, well his name is not that, so I had to change it.. ;) ) But I wish you all a happy and healthy Christmas, and even a better year!
I think you should think of all the changes you want to make and make some small changes already, to do the big changes next year. You have some time now, just some days for the New Year... You'll be on time. Just try some of these changes you wish already, and you will see, things will go easier next year. All you then have to do is doing it and keep doing it.
Finally the cover picture of the sign of life cover was approved. I tried a few and everytime they were turned down after being approved at first. I choose no pictures of me and my kids. I hope you like it the way it is now.
I still miss my kids and I sang this right after they were taken. So forever we can remember the sound in my voice and the almost impossible feelings to sing with.
And I hope it releases them and lots of dutch kids which were taken under very suspicious circumstances, there is a big fraud going on.
Judges abusing their power against the law taking kids and with fals rumors, fals papers giving the kids to other people , so they can earn on it.
Thousands of friends I now have in groups online and “real life “which is the same cause we all wouldnt like eachother less if we only saw eachother in “ real life”,but all of us go through the same.
Our judges dont do childrens rights while we as a country signed those.
And I am APA member (one of the divisions I am member of wanted to introduce me this week to the board) , I learned so much also at APA, I know this is damaging to kids.
It is unethical and onlogic, against science and the law and totally unnescasary.
I asked for a adjustment for school, and the law explained I should get it and some other judge must decide, but locals abused the situation and went to family court which isnt where this had to go by law. So the kids already have university studies and all dutch government companies had explained me what to do, even attendence officers in Amsterdam, but the locals didnt want to follow the laws. So this is extra hard, besides the in general faults the country has by taking kids away against the real laws we have and besides we psychologists explained its damaging and that other ways are possible and must be used. And besides we are in charge APA finds that too, but our local social work got out of control abusing the kids and mis using the family course judges to earn money on families and kids. They get bonusses for every child taken away. Its what they fraud for and lie for. Mostly that job is for poor people, studies lower then associate degrees and combined with just a few lowest study majors of bachelors. All not knowing much. And they took the criminal way.
Thank you for all your love through this time!
I am making a movie: shadows And will make songs for that which will be on an album. I have a few almost done for recording!